Title: Vanilla
Author:
futuristicfuryPairing: BellDom
Rating: NC-17/18
Beta: The amazing
pau93. Thank you profoundly for putting up with my silly doubts. ;)
Warning: PWP, slight mentions of non-con, bondage and Matt's drool.
Summary: The alternation between the forcefulness and the over abundant love between our lovely boys and them not wanting to hurt each other
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"A certain blond hero awaited him on both sides of his consciousness." wow, this is beautiful.
This is so good! The alternation between the forcefulness and the over abundant love between the two and the not wanting to hurt each other, was simply stunning.
Loved the floating between sleep and awake too.
Very well done.
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Hahaha i should have asked you to summarise the story before posting this . xD
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The alternation between the forcefulness and the over abundant love between the two and them not wanting to hurt each other.
You are so oblivious to the hidden writer inside you! :)
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A certain blond hero awaited him on both sides of his consciousness.
That line is amazing!
His senses were blind with the intense stimulation, but his heart was beating with an urgent wish. A need to share his pleasure. A need to touch his lover in the same way he was being touched. A need to hear his lover’s voice break as his body filled with ecstasy would soon come undone.
*bows down* Fantastic. I love it that they could not keep up the roleplay, because their love is just so intense and they had to express it right then. I also liked Matt reminiscing about their previous roleplay, Dom's shyness there is in striking contrast with this one.
Absolutely brilliant job, Satya!!! <3
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You just don't know how much this comment makes me happy! I'm just humbled by your words. Brigi, dear you are too kind! ;) *hugs*
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CRIES. HOLY SHIT i knew this wpuld be good!
Bottom matt in a vulnerable position in that limbo between consent and want, while not necessarily in a roleplay, is SUCH a kink of mine. Loved how it started in quite a dark vibe (though the drool made me laugh haha) and it progressed through several stages until the end.
Exquisite attention to detail without losing sight of the main story. This was so much more than a pwp! It really was a bit of a trip into their sexuality but just the tip of the iceberg and leaving you wanting so much more. And hot as fuck too *fans self* Petition to make several episodes out of this ahem
Idk how i missed this when it was posted cos the warnings are a right beacon to me hahaha but I also forget things easily these days re fic so meh to me.
Random but i loved the mention to matt's eye thing, instant visualised that pic of him in a plane with it on his forehead. Love the real life elements brought into fic :D
Terrific piece, you def need to post more on MS, good writers are needed! Thanks for sharing!
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Yes yes yes yes i wanted to play with that consent and want dilemma but i didn't want it to be very serious too. Haha...the drool bit was quite planned to ease the dark setting a bit. I laugh a lot at that! Silly me and Silly Matt. xD
Wow that's a high praise! I don't know if THAT is well deserved by me alone. pau93 helped refine the details a lot! Aaaaaannnd more of this kind of stuff (roleplay) is coming. I'm currently working on one of the requests. I hope it will be out soon! ;)
Aww it's okay...i totally get you. I am lagging on a lot of reading myself. Can't complain enough about RL! :P
I'm glad you caught the eye mask but! I was imagining the effect of association of small objects like these to vivid experiences...*.*
Thank you sooooo much for reading and letting me know what you think of this! It means a lottttttt! *hugs again*
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