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Mar 26, 2006 19:12

The faceplates of solitary bar-dwellers
dwindling as hours get less
happy, corners of mouths dragging
them to the ground. Whiskey face:
body screaming, throat reeling.

The only pickup lines you need
will lug a compact from a ditch,
but back-to-back tongues fling mud
over .............. eyes
....... too much ....... shadow.

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futurefossil March 27 2006, 00:58:00 UTC
we ought to meet before the next life or the next one or the next one

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