Homemaker

[futurebird]

I just revised this. I'd love to get some feedback.

HomemakerSpools, buns, thimbles, eyelets

Comments

[daiwainscott]

I really enjoyed this poem. It kinda makes me miss my mother. :)

[vyviane]

Hi,

I ran into your journal thru the INTJ friends page. I love this poem. I want to be a homemaker in the future. It's all I've wanted to be for a long time. This poem reminded me that other people see that as a profession and valid path as well. I get so many 'What the hell' stares when I tell people I just want to have babies and take care of a house.

Anyway, great work!

Vyviane

[sarahmarie02]

i like this...provokes great imagery
and something about it makes me want to go stay with my grandparents for awhile....