Tired... My FOOT hurts T_______T... My story's prologue

Nov 25, 2007 19:25

Well, had work today from 12 to 5.30pm although i got home just an hour ago T____T, my foot hurts like hell and i am tired *sighs* but it's good that it's my last day of work today so no more work for the rest of the year until i go back to Indonesia. YAYYY *victory dance*

Lately i've been writing a story, but then again... Reece unni hasn't gotten back to me about my prologue, but never mind it. I'll post it up today anyway ^_______^ hehehehe. It's not perfect,i wasn't even really thinking write when i wrote this. But whoever that browse through this please give me some concrit... I'll really appreciate it. I've never written before except for english essays and stuff but still, I had finally found some time to put pen on paper and my thoughts for the story so here it is:

Title: Untitled
Author: Me (futago_u)
Type: Chaptered (prologue/?)
Pairing: JaeHo, YooSu, ChangTa
Rating: PG 13(as of now, may change in the future)
Summary: Jae Joong, a goodie two shoes experienced the wonders of life through his meeting with the most dangerous of gang leaders of Seoul Jung Yun Ho.

Prologue

For the past five years of my life, I've trained myself in gun handling and hapkido for self-defense. My name is Kim Jae Joong, I am twenty - two years old, the youngest and only son out of nine children of the Kim family. I have dark, midnight black hair with coffee, gold streaks. I have big, black doe-like eyes and a bright smile that can light up anyone's day. I was often mistaken as a girl, but to tell you the truth, I am a straight guy, whose athletic ability is beyond the normal standard. There is no sport that i can't do.

Despite all of my achievements, I don't have a family; my mother, my father and my sisters had died in a terrible car accident. Now, I am in the care of my grandmother, who have been a widow since I was sixteen years of age. But, I don't consider her family, she is kind when she wants to be, although she is mean ninety nine percent of the time. She would cane me at the smallest mistake i committed or she would make me starve to atone to my small sins. Therefore, making my life a living hell the day I stepped into her country villa in Chung Nam.

My miserable life took a turn from being boring to extremely exciting when he came, took my hand and made me his queen. This is my story.

TBC

my days, fanfic

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