The Piece of My Heart (10/10)

[fumiyo92]

Title: The Piece of My Heart (10/10)
Author: fumiyo92
Pairings: Onkey
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, angst
Summary: Kibum is born just to give his heart for his sister and Jinki is stuck with his old promise, what happened when they meet? Can Kibum have his happiness?

Comments

[melalocket]

spooootttt >.<

[melalocket]

i really love this soooooo muchhhh !!!!
omg its soooo touchy ~
and minhyo is sooo cute saying " ma .. pa" >.<
kyaaaaaaaaaaa~

i love the ending bb!!!!
and ill wait for your new fic <3

[fumiyo92]

thank you...
I'll post it when it done ^^

[rinni1905]

I think it's a bit too soon to end this fic, since it would be more lovely to have Hyorin being punish for breaking someone's heart. And I'm surprised that Jinki actually did that with Hyorin, maybe he mistook her for Kibummie~

Other than that I think this fic is good, but I suggest you work in detail for your fic since it's lacking a bit of smooth flow, sometimes, I feel like reading a whole new fic.

I'm really sorry that I won't be able to read your next fic since I will super busy, but I will continue to supporting you after my work is done. Fighting!

[fumiyo92]

Yeah,, i feel like the ending is too rushed
kekeke

thank you for supporting my fic .
good luck with your work
Fighting!!!

[adyaby]

spooot~

[adyaby]

omg i'm so so so sorry for being this late! D:

but ;_____; love this sfm!!
they had their happy ending =')
hyorin u!!! sjdnjudfhjdks bitch!! ><" i still love her in real life tho xD

and can't wait to read ur new story!! *O*

[fumiyo92]

Thank you
I still write on it ^^

[mankadi]

o,o im glad everything is well in the end :)
and haha next story~ waiting for this..
though its hard for me to read girl! kibum or Jinki since i love both of them as males~
i will try my best and read :DD
<3

[fumiyo92]

it's hard for me too. kekeke
but you'll know later, hehehe
Foghting!!

[fumiyo92]

thank you ^^
is it??
I'll try to make it interesting ^^