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fumiyo92

The Piece of My Heart (7/10)

Feb 27, 2011 21:38

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Normal POV

Kibum just stare at Jinki, his face said that he is really surprised with Jinki’s sudden confession. Jinki look straight at Kibum’s eyes while holding his hands tightly, “I love you, Kibum…”

Tears started to leak up from Kibum’s eyes and rolling down on his cheek, he couldn’t say a word. He is speechless. He can’t think ( Read more... )

!fic: the piece of my heart, onkey fanfiction, side pairing: jongtae, rating: pg-13, length: chaptered, side pairing: minstal, pairing: onkey

Comments 12

mankadi February 27 2011, 15:56:04 UTC

gosh tha\t girl is a bitch D:
-sobs-
no no no i dont want kibum to be hurt when he find out ;A:
the only thing i can relax about is the fact that Jinki parents accepted key !!
okayy waiting for next~
asap please? -shining eyes=
<33

fumiyo92 February 28 2011, 10:18:52 UTC

I'll update it at the end of this week ^___^

rinni1905 February 28 2011, 04:00:52 UTC

This is so cute, I'm glad that Jinki's parents accepted Kibum easily. They must have known that Kibum was the right one for their son, he is very cute, indeed. Keke, seemed like other couldn't resist his cuteness, apart from Hyorin. That girl was so cunning, she must have set the whole thing up to ruin OnKey. I just hope Kibum wouldn't get hurt too much.

I love this chap, it's so fluffy. Aigoo, I hope the next chap wouldn't be so angsty. I just hate that Hyorin girl so much, she should have known that Onew would never love her. Sorry girl, he has Kibummie!

fumiyo92 February 28 2011, 10:20:47 UTC

I don't know about that, kekeke

adyaby March 1 2011, 12:38:58 UTC

Hyorin uuuu bitch!!!!!!
aghhh i really hate her!!!
this isn't good!!! no-oh!!! not good at all!!! Dx
kibummie's going to be hurt... i smell angst on the next chapter(s) T__T

fumiyo92 March 7 2011, 04:38:33 UTC

Your sense of smellis really good, kekeke

fairysiand March 5 2011, 00:10:51 UTC

i hate hyorin..
=="

how dare she is..

by the way nice fic..
can't wait the next chappie..

hello my name is haneul..15/f..*bow*
i call you unnie..
can't we be friend??
teehee..

fumiyo92 March 7 2011, 04:39:49 UTC

Hi Haneul~~
Yes, we can be friend~

I'll try to update as soon as possible

fairysiand March 7 2011, 20:29:20 UTC

*getting excited*

please give me big spot for me in your next chappie..^^

fumiyo92 March 8 2011, 01:29:38 UTC

Okay ^___^

melalocket March 12 2011, 17:44:36 UTC

OH MY GOSH!!!
that bitch >.<
uggghhhhhhhhhh!!!!!

and what will happen if kibumie know that onew sleep with that girl!!!!

heading to the nekt chap XD

fumiyo92 March 13 2011, 07:53:05 UTC

You can read on the next chap ^^