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The Piece Of My Heart (prologue)

Jan 14, 2011 22:31

Title: The Piece Of My Heart (prologue)
Author: fumiyo92
Pairings: Onkey
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, angst
Kibum is born just to give his heart for his sister and Jinki is stuck with his old promise, what happened when they meet? Can Kibum have his happiness?

( we still can do some medication until we have the suitable heart for her, except that she have another family who willing to die for her )

!fic: the piece of my heart, onkey fanfiction, rating: pg-13, length: chaptered, pairing: onkey

Comments 13

neneksihir January 14 2011, 21:39:50 UTC

spot!!! Yaaayy...
Jeezz... Please make it happy ending... =))

fumiyo92 January 15 2011, 02:02:36 UTC

I'll try ^___^

raiha_kasep January 14 2011, 23:19:44 UTC

Omoo,,its so cruel,,
How could key's parent do that,,
Its so mean,,
-hug key-

Btw thx 4 sharing
X3

fumiyo92 January 15 2011, 02:04:03 UTC

I know that parents wouldn't do that to their child but I want to make it, kekeke

rinni1905 January 15 2011, 06:49:10 UTC

Even though I understand that Kibum's mother loves her daughter so much that she was willing to sacrifice Kibum's own life, it was still so cruel. I wonder how would Kibum feel when he grown up, and find out that he was just merely a donor for his own sister. I hope Jinki could come like a knight in shining armor and save Kibummie's life.

But I was a bit confused here, how old is Kibum's sister? Would she still be in good condition when Kibum are old enough to give her his heart? I thought cancer patient would eventually die soon because of matastasis. Well, I think I should wait for the next chap to come so I could have the answer for my question.

Keke, I missed you, this fic is really good, but I just hope it wouldn't have too much angst, or my heart would be hurt for OnKey. And I also hope this fic would have happy ending too.

fumiyo92 January 15 2011, 07:31:33 UTC

She's 4 years old, you will know the other answer on the next chapters .
I'll try to put more happy scene than angst.

ngo_tau77 January 15 2011, 14:15:02 UTC

H e l l o ! I'm a new reader :)
I love the plogue
Poor Ki Bum =.=
His parents are s000 mean !!! How can they do that to their son.
I really don't know how Kibum will feel when he know that he was born only to sacrifice his heart 0_0 I wonder when Kibum will meat Jinki . Mabe his appearance will make Kibum's life more meaning .
I love a happy ending so plzzzzzzzzzzzzz let onkey be happy together .
I'm looking forward to the next chap ^.^

P/s : I'm hopeless at English -.0 poor me >.-

fumiyo92 January 16 2011, 02:19:35 UTC

thank you for loving it~~~

fallegstelpa January 15 2011, 16:48:13 UTC

Yey...Another one of your stories.
I don't know why, but these prologue of your story reminds me with a movie called My Sister's Keeper .
So many questions in my mind about the continuation of this story.
I hope you update the continuation of this story soon.
Thank you for these one.

fumiyo92 January 16 2011, 02:20:51 UTC

My Sister Keeper?? is it K-drama??
I don't know about that, kekekeke
I'll try to update it fast ^___^

fallegstelpa January 16 2011, 15:33:18 UTC

~~smile~~ It was not a K-drama, it was a film, starring Cameron Diaz, Abigail Breslin, Sofia Vassillieva, and others.
Outline of this film tells the story of a daughter (conceived by way of in vitro fertilization, to be a genetic match for her older sister) who filed a lawsuit against her parents because she was forced by her parents to donate a kidney to her sister (who was 15 years) who suffers from acute promyelocytic leukemia.
For detail about these movie you can visit the following sites:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/My_Sister's_Keeper_(film)
See you on the continuation of story you this.
I hope you post the update of this story soon.