Fic: If Thine Eye Offends

[theladyfeylene]

Title: If Thine Eye Offends
Author: theladyfeylene
Word Count: 1210
Spoilers: Spoilers for episodes 35, 36, 44+
Rating: R
Summary: Dante couldn't stand to look at him; she hated his face.
Warnings: Violence, self mutilation.

Comments

[etrangere]

*shivers* poor Envy. That was chilling.

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you. I think this is as close as I'll come to actively writing Envy as a sympathetic character. I always wondered how Homunculi discovered their powers, and since Envy was the first I wanted to play around with that with him. And with his own self loathing.

[tsunderes]

Ah Envy drama. How could I love you without it? xD

But a lovely and rather creepy story. Two words that really don't go together now that I think of it...

[theladyfeylene]

Envy needs his drama. :D

Thank you, very much. I've been playing around with this idea for a while.

[tsunderes]

Quite, quite. =D

ENVY NEEDS NO MOTHER. HE HAS adjoisafj-billion FANGIRLS.

[chrstphrl]

Lovely work. Dsturbing and sad. You've made Envy a sympathetic creature. Bravo.

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you, very much. I think this is probably the only piece I'll write where I actively tried to make Envy sympathetic.

[momoiro_usagi]

wow...that was really, really sad. I was almost crying. Envy is one of my very favorite characters anyways, but the way you wrote this elicits so much sympathy. good job!

[theladyfeylene]

Yeah, this was a depressing one. And the first time I actively tried to make Envy sympathetic. I'm very glad that you enjoyed!

[forgottenlover]

Oh Envy... ::small smile:: perfect

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you!