[September Competition Entry] Fanfiction - "Unravel The Spider’s Web."

[ranty_rie]

Title: Unravel The Spider’s Web.
Character(s): Alphonse Elric/Wrath. 
Beta: Zoe, aka Pride. 
Rating: NC-17. 
Genre: Angst. 
Warnings: Character death. Suggestions of barely consensual violent sex. Psychological torture. Mildly explicit description of sex. Prostitution. Drama. Queerness. Post anime series. Light Spoilers. Ambivalence regarding movie

Comments

[momoiro_usagi]

Wow! O_O These are absolutely excellent! I love how you work through every level of their relationship so beautifully and convincingly, and I really admire how you pulled off such perfect NC-17 drabbles with them, because I've personally never been able to get it quite right! ;) These are all absolutely beautiful, especially "broken" and "free"...I love your style so, so much, and I'm so glad to see people writing this pairing! ^_^ Nice work, and good luck on the contest! :)

[ranty_rie]

Thank you! ^_^

I don't know, NC-17 shots in this were more about their mental state than anything they were doing. It's kinda hard, though, to portrait what you want with a word limit (XD I admit I'm a complete seaweed, I can't write decent fic with less than 10 000 words), so it was trying. I'm happy it paid off.

My personal favorite is "Forgotten", since I have this tendency to give each character I write a completely OOC quirk, and Al's here happens to be one I can relate with, just a tad bit more creepy. I like "Broken", because it allowed me to use the one line I had in mind for this story, the "Sin and Sinner" idea of their relationship. And "Free", well, my beta whacked me upside the head when she read it because it was an open ending. I like those, it lets people think on their own. ;)

I'm glad you liked my style and I very much agree, c'mon people, Al/Wrath is so canon... XD

[momoiro_usagi]

Amen to that! XD Too bad the rest of the world doesn't see it, lol!

[digivolution]

Very, very nice! This pairing needs more love ^_^
My favorite is "Free."

[ranty_rie]

Much, much love...

...they also need a therapist, but that's beside the point XD

[digivolution]

XD So true, so true.