Oh my, what is this, a short comment? XD well... relatively XDhwan_sangJanuary 24 2014, 03:17:19 UTC
A reaper fic~ Once again on a completely different level of originality than most things, your AU's are too amazing delicious for words <3 *insert munching fat cat*
And the CHARACTERS XD
“You ready to go yet, babe?” Ravi, a tall reaper with pure white hair -that was the only pure thing about him- asked. Just about the best description of him ever XD
“Leo!” an all to familiar -and all too annoying- voice shouted I actually heard his voice in my head when I read it. Damnit Ken XD
“I love all this long hair,” he said appreciatively, fisting the black stands and pulling roughly. “It’s almost like you’re a girl,” AHA! XDDDD Yeah, Ken, /LEO'S/ the girl here *rolls eyes*
"Eyes coming up to stare at him mockingly every few moments, which just turned Taekwoon on even more" Of course lmao. These two have such an odd relationship XDD #notcomplaining
“Oh and like you don’t bottom when you’re with Ravi,” HA! No one tops Ravi lmao
“When you’re partnered with Ravi for so long, you learn a few fun tricks along the way. Ravi is just all powerful
Pulling out of the dark angel beneath him, he curled his body on top of Taekwoon's, snuggling more firmly against him and using him as an enormous body pillow. awwww :3
“Ah, Leo, my… oh it’s fine, I’ll get it,” he said sleepily, the boy getting up onto his knees before smashing his face against Taekwoon’s ass, making the taller boy squeal uncharacteristically. “Don’t want it getting onto the carpet,” was all the warning he got before Jaehwan was eating him out, licking at his own cum as it dribbled out of him. *dies* *dies laughing* perfect.
“I…” Taekwoon started, not quite sure what to say to that. The face I am imagining is the best
“You’re so abusive! I love it,” he cheered, crawling back on top of him yet again. *shakes head* this would so happen.
Jaehwan was smirking as he pulled him down until the taller boy was on top, straddling him, his already hard again cock sliding against Taekwoon’s ass. “I get to top.” And maybe Taekwoon could live with that too… but Hakyeon was so going to get it next time he saw him. If he even remembered Hakyeon’s name after this. Jaehwan would do everything in his power to see that he didn’t. Best ending~
First Onho, then 2woo, now Keo, what other pairings will you convert me to? XD It was great~ Love it! <3 poor Leo
Edit: I forgot to mention: OOOOOOOOOOOOTTOKAAAJIIIII
P.S. "Ravi said above him, rubbing lotion along his new partner’s tanned back." ..... Reapers.... and lotion? XDDDDD Reapers going on holiday is the funniest thing to me XD
Re: Oh my, what is this, a short comment? XD well... relatively XDfullmoonsynJanuary 24 2014, 04:00:00 UTC
Thank you ^^ I try, I try (no I don't I'm just lucky as shit OTL)
I agree with everything you said so... I'm just gonna comment on the ones I have witty/insertive replies to lmao
I absolutely LOVE how weird their relationship is! Ken is so.... odd to me. Such a bouncy but sexy but cute but manly.... he's very deceiving, more like a trickster, and I really tried to write him that way!
Well I mean, they make Ravi be the strongest (has telekinesis) IN the choreo so.... I just played off of that xD
That was SO awkward for me to write, Kim! But Ken REALLY wanted to do it so I was like... well okay... I guess... but you're gonna weird Leo as well as quite a few people out by doing it xDDDD
Probably my favorite line in the entire story. Ken is such a masochist.
I'm glad you like them! I personally LOVE them! So abusive yet secretly loving, it's so GAH. Just too cute! Follow me Kim, and I shall lead you to the shipping promised land! *marches off with ships in tow*
xD I just think it's funny imagining him rubbing lotion on a back that has ginormous wings sticking out of it xD and what beach are they on where it's okay to HAVE wings? Or do they take human form on vacation?? Hmmm... never know! ;P
And the CHARACTERS XD
“You ready to go yet, babe?” Ravi, a tall reaper with pure white hair -that was the only pure thing about him- asked.
Just about the best description of him ever XD
“Leo!” an all to familiar -and all too annoying- voice shouted
I actually heard his voice in my head when I read it. Damnit Ken XD
“I love all this long hair,” he said appreciatively, fisting the black stands and pulling roughly. “It’s almost like you’re a girl,”
AHA! XDDDD Yeah, Ken, /LEO'S/ the girl here *rolls eyes*
"Eyes coming up to stare at him mockingly every few moments, which just turned Taekwoon on even more"
Of course lmao. These two have such an odd relationship XDD #notcomplaining
“Oh and like you don’t bottom when you’re with Ravi,”
HA! No one tops Ravi lmao
“When you’re partnered with Ravi for so long, you learn a few fun tricks along the way.
Ravi is just all powerful
Pulling out of the dark angel beneath him, he curled his body on top of Taekwoon's, snuggling more firmly against him and using him as an enormous body pillow.
awwww :3
“Ah, Leo, my… oh it’s fine, I’ll get it,” he said sleepily, the boy getting up onto his knees before smashing his face against Taekwoon’s ass, making the taller boy squeal uncharacteristically. “Don’t want it getting onto the carpet,” was all the warning he got before Jaehwan was eating him out, licking at his own cum as it dribbled out of him.
*dies*
*dies laughing*
perfect.
“I…” Taekwoon started, not quite sure what to say to that.
The face I am imagining is the best
“You’re so abusive! I love it,” he cheered, crawling back on top of him yet again.
*shakes head* this would so happen.
Jaehwan was smirking as he pulled him down until the taller boy was on top, straddling him, his already hard again cock sliding against Taekwoon’s ass. “I get to top.”
And maybe Taekwoon could live with that too… but Hakyeon was so going to get it next time he saw him. If he even remembered Hakyeon’s name after this.
Jaehwan would do everything in his power to see that he didn’t.
Best ending~
First Onho, then 2woo, now Keo, what other pairings will you convert me to? XD
It was great~ Love it! <3
poor Leo
Edit: I forgot to mention: OOOOOOOOOOOOTTOKAAAJIIIII
P.S.
"Ravi said above him, rubbing lotion along his new partner’s tanned back."
..... Reapers.... and lotion? XDDDDD
Reapers going on holiday is the funniest thing to me XD
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I agree with everything you said so... I'm just gonna comment on the ones I have witty/insertive replies to lmao
I absolutely LOVE how weird their relationship is! Ken is so.... odd to me. Such a bouncy but sexy but cute but manly.... he's very deceiving, more like a trickster, and I really tried to write him that way!
Well I mean, they make Ravi be the strongest (has telekinesis) IN the choreo so.... I just played off of that xD
That was SO awkward for me to write, Kim! But Ken REALLY wanted to do it so I was like... well okay... I guess... but you're gonna weird Leo as well as quite a few people out by doing it xDDDD
Probably my favorite line in the entire story. Ken is such a masochist.
lol I love that ending too. Very fluffy~
*shakes head* oooooooottokajiiiii ooooooottokajiiiii >.< oh oh oh oh ottokajiii *cute face*
I'm glad you like them! I personally LOVE them! So abusive yet secretly loving, it's so GAH. Just too cute! Follow me Kim, and I shall lead you to the shipping promised land! *marches off with ships in tow*
xD I just think it's funny imagining him rubbing lotion on a back that has ginormous wings sticking out of it xD and what beach are they on where it's okay to HAVE wings? Or do they take human form on vacation?? Hmmm... never know! ;P
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