[oneshot] First Time (or: 아무것도 몰라요)

Feb 11, 2015 22:08

Title: First Time (or: 아무것도 몰라요)
Group: GOT7
Pairing: Jackson/Jr.
Rating: R
Length: 7,762 words
Warnings: ~Toys~, dick-to-face contact, abuse of parenthesis
Summary: At the club, Jackson picks a nice cute guy to lose his gay virginity with, but it turns out he really shouldn't have judged that particular book by its cover.
A/N: lo and behold, i now ( Read more... )

pairing: jackson/jr, group: got7, oneshot, rating: r

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carrotsandroses February 12 2015, 05:34:00 UTC
YES!!!!????!????

Where do I even start with this. Love your characterization. Jackson was spot-on, really refreshing take. And ever since I saw/read (?) those initial interviews implying how Jinyoung was the most perverse of the members, I have been WAITING for a fic like this.

Normally PWP bores me to tears but I was not bored in the slightest reading this from start to finish.

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yakiseop February 16 2015, 12:25:12 UTC
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you so much i poured all of my soul into making jackson true to (my) real life him
and yes... yes..... jr holds the key to many secrets. and to a bdsm dungeon possibly
im so relieved about this thank you!!! ♥ and thank you for leaving me a lovely comment too uwu ♥♥

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verisatum February 12 2015, 06:01:25 UTC
mmhmm that's the way uh huh uh huh i like it uh huh uh huh

BRILLIANT AND WONDERFUL!!! ofc it's not like perfect but it's def the way i like things to be *wonks*

but yessss yes yes to jackson "expanding his horizons"

rip straight boi wang jackson

i would give you notes about your exclamation marks but it doesn't seem like you'd care all that much (i actually mean this as a compliment dw lol) BUT LOVELY FIC THANK YOU FOR WRITING :-D

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yakiseop February 16 2015, 12:28:36 UTC
never has a musical reference worked so well i literally could not read that sentence in a different voice

THANK YOU SO MUCH yeah i... made some mistakes im sorry but aaaaa im so glad you liked it nonetheless
everyone needs to take a walk on the bi side and tbh jackson's is long overdue rest in pieces straightness

ah the exclamations i do that a lot... english is not my first language and sometimes i just can't find the right words so !!! exclamations. they're unexpectedly efficient
awie thank you so much ;; ♥♥ seriously thank you loads for taking your time to read and comment thank youu ♥

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verisatum February 17 2015, 04:01:23 UTC
why thank you. i pride myself on making quality references.

do you have a beta then? since english isn't your first language, a beta could be very useful!

i like exclamation marks but not really in writing as much yet in this fic i didn't mind as much as i usually do haha

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wangbaozi February 12 2015, 08:03:45 UTC
(◡‿◡✿)
(pls write more bottom!jackson it's what I live for)

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yakiseop February 16 2015, 12:31:41 UTC
bottom jackson is the only jackson i have ever heard and thought of so i could probs say we're on the same boat there my friend
and thank you for reading and commenting uvu ♥

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woohyun February 13 2015, 21:07:54 UTC
That was so hot omfg...

that ending hahah JB

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yakiseop February 16 2015, 12:33:19 UTC
thank you!!!! and that end works as a hook for a maybe possibly? who knows sequel i've been thinking of (completely unecessary information)
thank you for reading and commenting~ ♥

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woohyun February 16 2015, 14:55:09 UTC
MOREEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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