enjoying this, and you've got the characters down so well that it's wonderful - you've managed to pull off Andy seeing the after-effects of the body swop and WE know that Gwen is behaving like Jack and vice versa. It#s great.
but as one Brit to another - when did they start arming the South Wales Police Force as a regular occurance?
Suppose you could claim it's post Exit Wounds, but I'll be honest: I assumed you were an American writer making a Brit-pick error. Was even going to say "we don't arm our police"!
Er.....woops. I wrote that last Andy part whilst being up all night in Amsterdam airport....I thought I'd checked over it well enough to catch any sleep deprived mistakes, but there you go! ;P Thanks for pointing that out - I'll have a bit of a fiddle with it.
I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story as a whole though, and that you thing the post-swap section works. Cheers :)
Hello! *waves* I'm glad you're liking the body-swapness...I keep getting ambushed by pronouns writing it - it's worse than when I decided to write fic involving both Adam Green and Adam Ficek, I tell you ;P
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but as one Brit to another - when did they start arming the South Wales Police Force as a regular occurance?
Suppose you could claim it's post Exit Wounds, but I'll be honest: I assumed you were an American writer making a Brit-pick error. Was even going to say "we don't arm our police"!
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I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story as a whole though, and that you thing the post-swap section works. Cheers :)
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Right, on to the next part for me too!
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