NO. Stop talking to me and telling me to do something! Why don't you fucking describe it better in terms that make sense for writing?!
And that was extremely painful to read through. I also get the feeling that he ripped this off from Naruto.
Torchwich ran for dear life...
AND THIS is why you should never put an OP OC into a canon rewrite. Honestly, if you're going to pump them with so much power that every fight can be won with them using nothing but their pinky, then the bad guy should NEVER get away. If your OC is strong enough to defeat the bad guy then that's it! Don't make the bad guy escape. It only makes your OC look useless because with all that power, they STILL can't take on the big bad.
"Speaking of weapons, do you have a name for your's yet?" Sun asked.
"Um… Nipzona?"(the P is silent so it doesn't sound so stupid) AJ said more like it was a question than a statement. "Can I just use a made up word?"
No, you don't get to use the made up word. NOW KILL HIM, SUN!
What was the point of this though? There isn't anything meaningful about this name... and considering how the Stuthor was so particular about the silent p thing, it probably would have made more sense if it was named after something.
How about naming it after that one friend you mentioned having? Say he's an online gaming buddy, whose username is Nipzona. However, you always say "Nizona" because with the p, you think it sounds stupid. At least it'd mean something, and the whole "why have the p there but not say it" could some some sentimentality from Boy. Sure, he could have removed the p when writing it, but that's how his friend spells it and it wouldn't be his friend's username without the p. Plus, I might actually like Boy slightly better for him thinking of his friend so much as to name his weapon after that friend, because it'd tell me that even in a different word, he still thinks of his friend being right besides Boy when he needs it most.
I also get the feeling that he ripped this off from Naruto. It probably won't surprise you that he has a fic called "The Plus One of Team 7", where Boy gets dumped into Naruto to rip off that canon.
How about naming it after that one friend you mentioned having? But that would imply he actually cares about the people he left behind on Earth, and if he's angsty over something legitimate, it would detract from his Fauxnus angst!
It probably won't surprise you that he has a fic called "The Plus One of Team 7", where Boy gets dumped into Naruto to rip off that canon.
The Plus One of...?
*facepalms* I can't believe it. He's so lazy that he even rips himself off for title names! Does this guy have any title that is not "Plus One of Team So-So"?
At least this whole inner beast that's chained up inside him then breaks out and takes over temporary to kill things makes more sense there. Even if there's still no reason for Boy to have one inside him.
But that would imply he actually cares about the people he left behind on Earth, and if he's angsty over something legitimate, it would detract from his Fauxnus angst!
Of course, silly me. I forgot that he can't do anything to make him likable. Who wants to read a story where you can relate to the main character? How absurd!
NO. Stop talking to me and telling me to do something! Why don't you fucking describe it better in terms that make sense for writing?!
And that was extremely painful to read through. I also get the feeling that he ripped this off from Naruto.
Torchwich ran for dear life...
AND THIS is why you should never put an OP OC into a canon rewrite. Honestly, if you're going to pump them with so much power that every fight can be won with them using nothing but their pinky, then the bad guy should NEVER get away. If your OC is strong enough to defeat the bad guy then that's it! Don't make the bad guy escape. It only makes your OC look useless because with all that power, they STILL can't take on the big bad.
"Speaking of weapons, do you have a name for your's yet?" Sun asked.
"Um… Nipzona?"(the P is silent so it doesn't sound so stupid) AJ said more like it was a question than a statement. "Can I just use a made up word?"
No, you don't get to use the made up word. NOW KILL HIM, SUN!
What was the point of this though? There isn't anything meaningful about this name... and considering how the Stuthor was so particular about the silent p thing, it probably would have made more sense if it was named after something.
How about naming it after that one friend you mentioned having? Say he's an online gaming buddy, whose username is Nipzona. However, you always say "Nizona" because with the p, you think it sounds stupid. At least it'd mean something, and the whole "why have the p there but not say it" could some some sentimentality from Boy. Sure, he could have removed the p when writing it, but that's how his friend spells it and it wouldn't be his friend's username without the p. Plus, I might actually like Boy slightly better for him thinking of his friend so much as to name his weapon after that friend, because it'd tell me that even in a different word, he still thinks of his friend being right besides Boy when he needs it most.
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It probably won't surprise you that he has a fic called "The Plus One of Team 7", where Boy gets dumped into Naruto to rip off that canon.
How about naming it after that one friend you mentioned having?
But that would imply he actually cares about the people he left behind on Earth, and if he's angsty over something legitimate, it would detract from his Fauxnus angst!
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The Plus One of...?
*facepalms* I can't believe it. He's so lazy that he even rips himself off for title names! Does this guy have any title that is not "Plus One of Team So-So"?
At least this whole inner beast that's chained up inside him then breaks out and takes over temporary to kill things makes more sense there. Even if there's still no reason for Boy to have one inside him.
But that would imply he actually cares about the people he left behind on Earth, and if he's angsty over something legitimate, it would detract from his Fauxnus angst!
Of course, silly me. I forgot that he can't do anything to make him likable. Who wants to read a story where you can relate to the main character? How absurd!
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