Comments | fuda_100: (drabble exchange) "Worse than Death"

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(drabble exchange) "Worse than Death"

Dec 24, 2007 02:37

title: Worse than Death
author: osmalic
request: For veleda_k who prompted "Nagare, retribution"
word count: 100
note: How much do I love you for choosing the character I love to write? *g*

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Worse than Death"This is hell," Nagare observes flatly ( Read more... )

a: osmalic

Comments 6

veleda_k December 23 2007, 19:13:36 UTC

*flails* There are no words to describe how much I love this. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for fic that has Tsuzuki and Nagare meeting. And Nagare as a shinigami! I never even considered it, but it's great.

Is there any chance of seeing this as an expanded fic? (I'll be your best friend.)

osmalic December 24 2007, 04:21:40 UTC

*lol* I posted a gag fic of Tsuzuki and Nagare's meeting a long time ago. I cringe whenever I read it now. Thanks for liking it! I've seen some fics before where Nagare is a shinigami, and I've always been intrigued with the resulting repercussions between him and Hisoka.

As for the expanded fic, I'll try to write it! And serious, this time, I swear. :)

kinsugi December 23 2007, 21:01:57 UTC

Yes. I never even thought about the man, yet here he is, and of course. The quiet and implacable stillness of the moment is perfect; he deserves every excruciating second, as well as the years to come, although I'm concerned for the pain it will cause Hisoka. Second the motion for more, if you're up for it.

osmalic December 24 2007, 04:59:04 UTC

One of my interpretation of Meifu is always that they make their own punishments and Enma just feeds it so he'll have willing minions servants workers. They pass on when they're willing to forgive themselves, not necessarily asking for the forgiveness of all the people they've wronged. I tried to play that into this--a nightmare with only 100 words. *g* But I'm glad you liked it, especially the tone.

I'll try for a longer fic! This situation did make me think about it a lot. *lol* valeda_k is awesome with prompts.

arcanelight December 24 2007, 15:52:00 UTC

Oh, ouch. Loved how awkward that was. I could just see the father/son reunion being that brittle and silent.

I put my vote in with the others for more, please.

osmalic December 31 2007, 05:31:44 UTC

Thank you so much! I always love fics about Nagare and Hisoka meeting again.
I'll try to make a longer fic. XD It's fun writing about them.