"A Professional Relationship" Part 4

[fuchsiamae]

Fandom: Portal
Pairing: Cave/Caroline
Rating: M
Summary: Cave and Caroline spend a late night at the office.
Notes: Almost three weeks between updates this time, but I hope it's worth it -- almost 3000 words in this one. Most of it is sex.
Disclaimer: Portal and all associated characters belong to Valve. I just borrow them for my own sick pleasure.

Comments

[animagiblender]

I LOVE YOU FUCHSIA. ALSO, HE BITES HIS LIP LIKE A MAAAAAAAAAAAN. PROBABLY THE BEST LINE OF ANYTHING EVER. AND AS YOU CAN TELL, I AM SUPER PUMPED SO I CAN'T UNCAPSLOCK. THIS IS AMAZING. YOU PROLLY ALREADY KNOW THAT.

[4ever_sleep]

Omg you're Cave and Caroline are spot on! I adore all your stories and I'm super excited for part five :D Also? Cave as a cuddler? Amazing :3

[anonymous]

You...
You are the only author that manages to make me bounce.
I mean it, when I saw there was an update, I bounced. I bounced and 'squee'd and dropped everything I was doing to read this. And I'm so glad I did, it was so well written and sexy and detailed~!
The details are what really set this apart from other fanfictions; they're all perfect! I love the little things like the color of his car and the way you describe their thoughts and actions.
I'm gonna go draw some fanart now and reread this =P.
'till next time-
~ShinyMudkip95~

<3

[anonymous]

Oh my God. May I just say that it is SO hot that Caroline calls Cave "sir" and "Mr. Johnson" while doing naughty, naughty sex things?

I love you so much.

[conqueror_wurm]

And amazing things continue to be amazing! I have to say that I love that Caroline keeps referring to it as 'lovemaking' ... that feels so right for her. Aww.

The awkward exit scene was lots of fun to read, as was the peaceful contemplation directly following as they drive to his place--both are just great bits of writing, the first for its humor and character, the second for its lovely, warm descriptions.

And then porn, glorious porn. Nothing I can say about that but yes ma'am.