"A Professional Relationship" Part 3

[fuchsiamae]

Fandom: Portal
Pairing: Cave/Caroline
Rating: M
Summary: Cave and Caroline spend a late night at the office.
Notes: And a month later, I finally finish this update. Hope it's worth the wait.
Disclaimer: Portal and all associated characters belong to Valve. I just borrow them for my own sick pleasure.

Comments

[hellerii]

Goosebumps man.

Goosebumps.

[animagiblender]

So good! Want more!

Omgomgamazingupdate!

[anonymous]

Okay, you have no idea how badly I needed this. I just had the single most stressful and anxious day of my life, and this made me smile, laugh, and just really made me feel much better. All of that, coupled with the news that there's going to be a fourth part? My evening's a good one now!

Superb writing, as always, your style adds to the great emotion behind the characters, and the fact that it's smut is just awesome (smut makes everything better.) Caroline's thought process made me laugh a few times, she's so jumpy yet determined. It's the perfect character you've carved for her; taking the little we know from the games and somehow using it to build this amazing character. Honestly, I don't think Valve could have done any better if they tried.

I'll be out to gush again when part four comes out. Ta-ta!
~ShinyMudkip95~

<3

[nekokatsun]

I love your writing. I love it so much. This is SPECTACULAR.

Please, please, please, let domme!Caroline out somefic soon to play with her boss...

[conqueror_wurm]

There are honestly no words for how fantastic this chapter is just my GOD sdjflksfslfdkjdfkljsdfjsdf;lkj