Fic thread [Kasabian, Serge/Tom, shutupanddoeet fic]
Preservation of old shutupanddoeet comment fic and comments:
emothy
2006-09-18 08:35 pm UTC
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Kasabian, Serge/Tom, "7. Licor (Liquor)"
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Considering how often you all get drunk (since you turned fourteen; soaking your shoes as you nudged and spilt over one another in back alleys), Serge really has trouble holding his alcohol. Not initially, and not in front of people, but so many times he has waved a solid goodbye to all the pretty people in the room and smiled with pearly whites, only to fall against you as the door shut, sour breath and a smile into your neck. Heavier than he looks, his stubble scrapes against your skin and before you're even out of the public eye he's trying to get his fingers down your jeans and his tongue in your mouth. He tastes the same as you, and you can't work out where he ends and you begin.
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emothy
2006-09-18 08:43 pm UTC
( link) Kasabian, Serge/Tom, "2. Escalera (Stairs)". Continuation of Licor.
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Getting back to your hotel room is an adventure, because when Serge is drunk he's even more paranoid about the elevator than usual. Whenever he's forced to ride in one he talks constantly as though to convince himself the noise will keep it from getting stuck and trapping them all. It's easier to stumble up the stairs with him, no matter how many flights up your room is. Sometimes Serge trips, usually a few times in a row. He finds it amusing when the world jerks itself out from under his feet and lands him on his ass, and laughs when he's on his hands and knees trying to crawl up the stairs.
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emothy
2006-09-18 08:54 pm UTC
( link) Kasabian, Serge/Tom, "15. Piel (Skin)". Continuation of Licor and Escalera.
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There's no point at all trying to undress Serge and get him into bed like a normal person when he's drunk, because his limbs are more relaxed than a rag doll's. One of two things inevitably happens; Serge either completely passes out and never notices or cares that he's fully dressed still, or (and this one happens far more often) he wriggles his way out of his tight trousers and shirt on his own an before you know it he's rolling over and on top of you, hair getting all your face and he doesn't even notice. His grin is similar to his "I'm so drunk and everything's so funny," one, but it's slightly more predatory.
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truntles
2006-09-18 09:56 pm UTC
( link) EM. my eyes are like the size of teacups with the happy. O.O <--- like that yo.
*flails a lotlotlot*
okay, so i'm gonna try and be at least a little bit constructive and tell you what i like about it, so uhm yesh i LOVE that it's actually tom taking care of serge and serge being a bit out of control for once. i LOVE that you had serge be paranoid about elevators because i'm the same way but with escalators, haha! i can't stand them omg, they want to eat me okay? it's the truth and you all know it. i LOVE this: He tastes the same as you, and you can't work out where he ends and you begin and this laughs when he's on his hands and knees trying to crawl up the stairs (<--- mwaha so reminded me of those halfnekkid!drunk!serge pics ahem) and this His grin is similar to his "I'm so drunk and everything's so funny," one, but it's slightly more predatory. dude. duuude. so many fangirl hearts for you. basically i just LOVE that you're writing kasabian fic, eventhough it gives me a freaking complex, because ohEMgee.
*flails some more*
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emothy
2006-09-20 09:25 pm UTC
( link) Thanks ;)
*writes more*
Kasabian, Serge/Tom, "20. Sangre (Blood)". Continuation of Licor, Escalera and Piel.
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Serge bites when he's drunk, it's a proven fact. Whether the alcohol makes him more playful, or violent, or if it makes him forgetful of what he's doing, you don't know. When there's a sharp pain and a tingling for hours afterwards, it doesn't really matter.
Sometimes he draws blood, and laps it up with tiny licks of his tongue. He grins when you shiver and moan, and when there's a drop left on his lip you dither between wanting to reach up and wipe it off and just leaving it there and look at it forever.
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emothy
2006-09-20 09:32 pm UTC
( link) Kasabian, Serge/Tom, (Writer's Choice) "Hangover". Continuation of Licor, Escalera, Piel and Sangre.
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Considering how often you all get drunk, Serge has never been a hangover sufferer. As drunk as sin the night before, it's you who can't bear the morning light that streams in within a few hours after you've gotten back to the hotel. It helps to wake up and find a warm body curled in beside you though, and it's almost possible to ignroe the way Serge's long hair itches where it lays across your skin.
He wakes up perky, but is considerate of you, not making too much noise. After a trip across the room to the bathroom and back he slips back under the covers and ruffles your hair gently.
Sometimes you just get drunk to be taken care of the morning after.
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vacivity
2006-09-20 09:36 pm UTC
( link) New numbers!
8
11
17
22
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emothy
2006-09-20 09:39 pm UTC
( link) Okay, they are:
8. Reglas (Rules)
11. Lluvia (Rain)
17. Conejo (Rabbit)
22. Música (Music)
and a writer's choice :)
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sour_kitty
2006-10-01 03:48 pm UTC
( link) oh dude i love this serge and want to keep him in mah pocket for when i go out clubbing *plateshine*
and now for the proper constructive comment thingy *cough* did i mention the pretty hot serge? i love the fact that with the first three it just seems so real, like i can totally imagine tom being the one to look after serge when he finally lets his hair down ;) like serge has to look after tom all day because yaknow its tom lol.
he has waved a solid goodbye to all the pretty people in the room and smiled with pearly whites, only to fall against you as the door shut, sour breath and a smile into your neck. Heavier than he looks, his stubble scrapes against your skin and before you're even out of the public eye he's trying to get his fingers down your jeans and his tongue in your mouth i love this whole part and..
He finds it amusing when the world jerks itself out from under his feet and lands him on his ass, and laughs when he's on his hands and knees trying to crawl up the stairs. <--- lol who hasnt done that rilly *plateshines summore*
dont you love how my constructive commenting is me fangirling you as usual :p but yesh. being serious i loved that you could read each other these seperately if wanted, but its the final line of the final drabble where it joins it all up full circle that makes it so perfect. thank you for writing kasabian and well done for making it so priddy muffin ;)
did i mention the priddy serge? :D
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emothy
2006-09-18 08:35 pm UTC
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Kasabian, Serge/Tom, "7. Licor (Liquor)"
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Considering how often you all get drunk (since you turned fourteen; soaking your shoes as you nudged and spilt over one another in back alleys), Serge really has trouble holding his alcohol. Not initially, and not in front of people, but so many times he has waved a solid goodbye to all the pretty people in the room and smiled with pearly whites, only to fall against you as the door shut, sour breath and a smile into your neck. Heavier than he looks, his stubble scrapes against your skin and before you're even out of the public eye he's trying to get his fingers down your jeans and his tongue in your mouth. He tastes the same as you, and you can't work out where he ends and you begin.
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emothy
2006-09-18 08:43 pm UTC
( link) Kasabian, Serge/Tom, "2. Escalera (Stairs)". Continuation of Licor.
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Getting back to your hotel room is an adventure, because when Serge is drunk he's even more paranoid about the elevator than usual. Whenever he's forced to ride in one he talks constantly as though to convince himself the noise will keep it from getting stuck and trapping them all. It's easier to stumble up the stairs with him, no matter how many flights up your room is. Sometimes Serge trips, usually a few times in a row. He finds it amusing when the world jerks itself out from under his feet and lands him on his ass, and laughs when he's on his hands and knees trying to crawl up the stairs.
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emothy
2006-09-18 08:54 pm UTC
( link) Kasabian, Serge/Tom, "15. Piel (Skin)". Continuation of Licor and Escalera.
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There's no point at all trying to undress Serge and get him into bed like a normal person when he's drunk, because his limbs are more relaxed than a rag doll's. One of two things inevitably happens; Serge either completely passes out and never notices or cares that he's fully dressed still, or (and this one happens far more often) he wriggles his way out of his tight trousers and shirt on his own an before you know it he's rolling over and on top of you, hair getting all your face and he doesn't even notice. His grin is similar to his "I'm so drunk and everything's so funny," one, but it's slightly more predatory.
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truntles
2006-09-18 09:56 pm UTC
( link) EM. my eyes are like the size of teacups with the happy. O.O <--- like that yo.
*flails a lotlotlot*
okay, so i'm gonna try and be at least a little bit constructive and tell you what i like about it, so uhm yesh i LOVE that it's actually tom taking care of serge and serge being a bit out of control for once. i LOVE that you had serge be paranoid about elevators because i'm the same way but with escalators, haha! i can't stand them omg, they want to eat me okay? it's the truth and you all know it. i LOVE this: He tastes the same as you, and you can't work out where he ends and you begin and this laughs when he's on his hands and knees trying to crawl up the stairs (<--- mwaha so reminded me of those halfnekkid!drunk!serge pics ahem) and this His grin is similar to his "I'm so drunk and everything's so funny," one, but it's slightly more predatory. dude. duuude. so many fangirl hearts for you. basically i just LOVE that you're writing kasabian fic, eventhough it gives me a freaking complex, because ohEMgee.
*flails some more*
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emothy
2006-09-20 09:25 pm UTC
( link) Thanks ;)
*writes more*
Kasabian, Serge/Tom, "20. Sangre (Blood)". Continuation of Licor, Escalera and Piel.
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Serge bites when he's drunk, it's a proven fact. Whether the alcohol makes him more playful, or violent, or if it makes him forgetful of what he's doing, you don't know. When there's a sharp pain and a tingling for hours afterwards, it doesn't really matter.
Sometimes he draws blood, and laps it up with tiny licks of his tongue. He grins when you shiver and moan, and when there's a drop left on his lip you dither between wanting to reach up and wipe it off and just leaving it there and look at it forever.
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emothy
2006-09-20 09:32 pm UTC
( link) Kasabian, Serge/Tom, (Writer's Choice) "Hangover". Continuation of Licor, Escalera, Piel and Sangre.
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Considering how often you all get drunk, Serge has never been a hangover sufferer. As drunk as sin the night before, it's you who can't bear the morning light that streams in within a few hours after you've gotten back to the hotel. It helps to wake up and find a warm body curled in beside you though, and it's almost possible to ignroe the way Serge's long hair itches where it lays across your skin.
He wakes up perky, but is considerate of you, not making too much noise. After a trip across the room to the bathroom and back he slips back under the covers and ruffles your hair gently.
Sometimes you just get drunk to be taken care of the morning after.
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vacivity
2006-09-20 09:36 pm UTC
( link) New numbers!
8
11
17
22
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emothy
2006-09-20 09:39 pm UTC
( link) Okay, they are:
8. Reglas (Rules)
11. Lluvia (Rain)
17. Conejo (Rabbit)
22. Música (Music)
and a writer's choice :)
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sour_kitty
2006-10-01 03:48 pm UTC
( link) oh dude i love this serge and want to keep him in mah pocket for when i go out clubbing *plateshine*
and now for the proper constructive comment thingy *cough* did i mention the pretty hot serge? i love the fact that with the first three it just seems so real, like i can totally imagine tom being the one to look after serge when he finally lets his hair down ;) like serge has to look after tom all day because yaknow its tom lol.
he has waved a solid goodbye to all the pretty people in the room and smiled with pearly whites, only to fall against you as the door shut, sour breath and a smile into your neck. Heavier than he looks, his stubble scrapes against your skin and before you're even out of the public eye he's trying to get his fingers down your jeans and his tongue in your mouth i love this whole part and..
He finds it amusing when the world jerks itself out from under his feet and lands him on his ass, and laughs when he's on his hands and knees trying to crawl up the stairs. <--- lol who hasnt done that rilly *plateshines summore*
dont you love how my constructive commenting is me fangirling you as usual :p but yesh. being serious i loved that you could read each other these seperately if wanted, but its the final line of the final drabble where it joins it all up full circle that makes it so perfect. thank you for writing kasabian and well done for making it so priddy muffin ;)
did i mention the priddy serge? :D
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