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frolicandfall

Space They Cannot Touch

Apr 10, 2010 08:21

This is the prologue to a new fic I've been working on. It's looking like another epic, so that's my free time sorted for the next six months.

Title: Prologue: Time is Running Out
Pairing: Matthew/Dominic
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A Muse gig comes to an unexpected end.
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse. The events within are entirely fictional. Thankfully.
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head_o_rainbows April 10 2010, 00:42:27 UTC

I can't even comment.... this is... oh wow.... I..
Oh Dom. poor Dom.... how horrible must Matt feel..

head_o_rainbows April 10 2010, 01:39:43 UTC

Okay now That i can breath again.
This feels really real. Like i'm actually there. (when I did see them Matt wore his red pants.... and so did I)

Oh please say Dom is okay. Matt would not survive accidently killing his best friend. wow. you have me almost in tears again.

frolicandfall April 12 2010, 05:47:57 UTC

Yeah. It's going to get pretty angsty before it starts to get better.

Thanks for reading. :)

wspho April 10 2010, 05:34:27 UTC

Oh GOD!!! I need to breath, breath....
That's brilliant, and I just need a moment to clam down...
That whole writing is so true, though I never want Dom to get hurt again, but, you really got me, especially about how you feel, what you wear, what you say to your friends before and during the show, and what you wish them to play...all of these remind me the first time I watch MUSE live. And the PurpleSkinner! remind me how excited when I finally find my first bloody red skinner little one, and how amazing my friends and I felt when we wear in red, lime yellow and light green among all the black others wearing. :)
And the writing itself, just good, really good...
Hope nothing terrible happen to YourDom, and it scared the shit out of me when reading the blood scene. (Think I will cry too when I see this...)
Thanks and love you so much <3!!! CHEERS!

frolicandfall April 12 2010, 05:49:11 UTC

Thank you so much.

One of the reasons I chose to write it from Ellie's point of view is that I wanted to try and capture that energy that floods the crowd before and during a Muse show. I'm glad you felt I succeeded.

Cheers!

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frolicandfall April 12 2010, 05:50:42 UTC

he's going to be okay. Right?

...maybe...

*cackles evilly*

Thanks for reading.

problematique75 April 10 2010, 08:58:03 UTC

OH.MY.GOD.

I only realised at the end of this that I had been holding my breath the entire time.

I have often wondered what would happen if Matt accidentally hurts Dom when flinging his guitar around.

Right now I am really worried that something serious has happened to Dom. (I actually scrolled back up to see that this was the epilogue, so hopefully Dom will survive!)

PLEASE update soon!

frolicandfall April 12 2010, 05:53:30 UTC

I only realised at the end of this that I had been holding my breath the entire time.

Wow. That's quite a reaction. I had hoped it would keep people on their toes.

Thank you.

shuralove April 10 2010, 10:02:34 UTC

i was completely caught up in that. You convyed the anticipation, joy and excitement so so well. I was smiling so much as I read. Which soon changed as I realised what happened.Fabulous start XD

...and a new journey begins. *straps self in*

frolicandfall April 12 2010, 05:54:13 UTC

*straps self in as well*

Thanks for coming along for the ride!