All Hail The Heartbreaker - Chapter 8

[frogscookie]

Disclaimer: I have invested heavily in Acme traps however Ivy and Rachel continue to outwit my attempts to catch them. The title is from Beautiful Child by Fleetwood Mac.

A/N: Oh my god how long can it take to write a chapter? This chapter kicked my ass. I would also like to say people who push people over on trains should have their knees bashed

Comments

[moon_vamp_asc]

nnnooooo! dont stop there it was just starting to get to the gasping 'what are you talking about?' parts. still love the story and thanks for the explanation segment

[dear_heart89]

Your update is brilliant Cookie and I can't wait to see where you plan on going with this, I really like the idea of Ivy and Rachel being married and I have to agree with Moon....nooo don't stop there ; )

thanks for reviewing

[frogscookie]

Hey Moon vamp

[kali_blue]

This is very inventive and awesome. You have taken KH's initial idea and twisted and turned it into a believable tale of both ancient and current power of struggles and the bonds that can grow. Frankly KH never bothered to develop or explain a relationship of the vamps and demons and how they existed. Brilliant! I am loving the explanations of the marks on Ivy and the promises pledged to each other, Rachel's new shape and memory loss. Married consorts ~~LOL that is fantastic.

[frogscookie]

Hey Kali blue

[anonymous]

Awwww man! Don't stop! It's just getting good!

[anonymous]

Nice! Can't wait for that confrontation!

[anonymous]

I'm hooked! Please continue. Bad place to let it hang!

[anonymous]

I just found your story recently and I have devoured it like a beloved book. I once couldn't wait to read this series, but finally gave up in frustration. I would love to see you branch out of fanfic and perhaps write some original stories that you could e- publish ala HP Mallory. You have the imagination, let it run free...but don't stop writing this!