Visiting Smallville: 4b/21

[frog_artjuice]

“So apparently the cops chased the kids here - into the south wing.” Sam looked around the dark room.

Comments

[civillove]

i tried to read part 4a but it says the link is broken ):

[frog_artjuice]

OK, I think I've fixed it... thanks for telling me!

[civillove]

never mind, i went to your main journal page and read it there. the link is broken on winchullivan just so you know,

great chapter!

[frog_artjuice]

Thanks! Livejournal said it was too long to post as one entry...:(. It was really annoying.

I'm glad you liked it!

[civillove]

oh yeah, i've had that happen to me before, no problem!

[pen37]

This has been an interesting little fic, but I'm confused on one point. Does Chloe known that Sam and Dean are hunters, or not? At one point, I think I remember Gabe telling the boys that he kept that from her, and In this installment, Chloe told Pete that she thought they were PI's. But at the same time, they haven't made any effort to hide the fact that they're hunting. Chloe looks at their dad's journal, does research for them and she was on the phone with them for the whole episode with Ellicot. I like the story quite a bit, but the issue of whether she knows or not is distracting me. Could you please clarify that point?

[frog_artjuice]

She has a vague idea but they haven't actually told her. She told Pete that they were Private Investigators because they investigate things (and she doesn't exactly want to say ghost hunter). She has no idea that her dad was a hunter. I think they're going to tell her soon - because it's really unfair to use her find stuff but not have her know what's going on. She doesn't really know about their dad (except that he's missing) and she has no idea about Jess.

Anyway... thanks! I'm glad you enjoy it!

[pen37]

You're welcome.

[lynzie914]

This was great! I love how you combined the two episodes.