Something I wrote...
Okay, ya'll know I'm not a writer. One a millenium an idea for a poem/possible song strikes me and I write something down. Here's something I wrote just now. Not about anyone or anything in particular, but here goes...
So what would you say if I told you,
We weren't so different after all?
And if I told you that I loved you,
Would you go hide behind that wall?
The radiator's banging
A strange rhythm in my ear,
And wisps of breath pouring out my lungs,
tell me never to fear.
I know you're out there sleeping,
curled up under your sheets,
If I asked if I could join you,
would you share with me all of your...heats?
Cuase I'm just dying to be with you,
And I know you're not that type of girl,
But I'll share with you all my secrets,
Maybe...I can make your slight legs curl.
Alright, terrible, I'm sure. But I'd love some feedback...anybody?
So what would you say if I told you,
We weren't so different after all?
And if I told you that I loved you,
Would you go hide behind that wall?
The radiator's banging
A strange rhythm in my ear,
And wisps of breath pouring out my lungs,
tell me never to fear.
I know you're out there sleeping,
curled up under your sheets,
If I asked if I could join you,
would you share with me all of your...heats?
Cuase I'm just dying to be with you,
And I know you're not that type of girl,
But I'll share with you all my secrets,
Maybe...I can make your slight legs curl.
Alright, terrible, I'm sure. But I'd love some feedback...anybody?