Pretty BefuddledamedamacherryJuly 29 2020, 05:06:18 UTC
I'm sorry I comment on this chapter so late. I did read it before chapter 16 was up and enjoyed it so much!
I was so confused about the dragon, wondering from where the hell anyone got a dragon on Gran Pulse. I thought it was some kind of fancy gadget or flying device. And didn't even consider that Bahamut is in fact a dragon and the only one in the game!! XD And then, you dropped the Fang&Vanille bomb! And I freaked out! You got me! I REALLY didn't see it coming! (Even though they were mentioned in most, if not all of the previous chapters! I feel stupid now 😂) Well played, girl! I enjoyed it!
I hope Fang and Vanille will be part of the last chapter? Will you attack the Serah Problem there as well? I can't wait to read it!
Re: Pretty Befuddledfrkmgnt1August 3 2020, 23:21:36 UTC
I'm about to get the last chapter posted and yes, Fang and Vanille are in it, and I had to deal with the Serah issue as well. It's the longest chapter I've ever written, at nearly 16,000 words. It's completely absurd.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I was looking forward to your feedback. I'm behind on answering comments, so forgive me. I will answer the other comments today as well. Chapter 17 will be two separate posts here just because of the size of the chapter, but it's still only one chapter, and all going up today on here, then AO3 and FF.net. And I'll be done. Holy crap. Nearly 9 years from when I went on hiatus for this story. (September 2011.) That's nuts.
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I was so confused about the dragon, wondering from where the hell anyone got a dragon on Gran Pulse. I thought it was some kind of fancy gadget or flying device. And didn't even consider that Bahamut is in fact a dragon and the only one in the game!! XD
And then, you dropped the Fang&Vanille bomb! And I freaked out! You got me! I REALLY didn't see it coming! (Even though they were mentioned in most, if not all of the previous chapters! I feel stupid now 😂)
Well played, girl! I enjoyed it!
I hope Fang and Vanille will be part of the last chapter? Will you attack the Serah Problem there as well? I can't wait to read it!
Lots of love! ❤
Lissy
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I was looking forward to your feedback. I'm behind on answering comments, so forgive me. I will answer the other comments today as well. Chapter 17 will be two separate posts here just because of the size of the chapter, but it's still only one chapter, and all going up today on here, then AO3 and FF.net. And I'll be done. Holy crap. Nearly 9 years from when I went on hiatus for this story. (September 2011.) That's nuts.
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