Fic: Do I Dare Disturb the Universe: Chapter 14 Time to Murder & Create II: A Hundred Indecisions

[frkmgnt1]

Disclaimer: I own the plot, not the players.

"Man is the cruelest animal."
-Friedrich Nietzsche

Chapter 14
Time to Murder and Create
Part II: A Hundred Indecisions

Original time: T minus 5 hours 45 minutes
New time: T plus 30 minutes

Comments

Cliffhanger

[amedamacherry]

You must be planning these cliffhangers even before you start writing the chapter itself! This is as frustrating as it is inspiring, but nonetheless it hits it's target and I can't wait to read on!!!

I had to look up the translation for "awl", but even with the German word I had no idea what it was, so I looked it up and... wished that I hadn't! O_o Poor Snow! Now I don't know whether to blame you or my own brain for those images!

Good to see that you are up and well, regarding the crazy shit that is going on in the US. I was kinda worried, and seeing this new chapter was a great relief!
Thank you for sharing your (sometimes crazy and horrible) ideas!
Take care and stay healthy!

Lots of love
Lissy

Re: Cliffhanger

[frkmgnt1]

I'm so sorry about the horrible mental images of poor Snow and the awl. I'm also very sorry about this cliffhanger, but I promise, the next chapter will be posted very soon. Very, very soon

RE: Cliffhanger

[frkmgnt1]

Chapters `15 and 16 are up. Chapter 16 is exclusive to Livejournal for right now. I’ll post it on FF.net and Ao3 later or tomorrow. This story started here with only LJ friends even interested in reading it, so it just felt right to let you (since you’re probably the only one of the original group who still checks LJ) read chapter 16 first. After all, the whole romance between Snow and Lightning built up toward this chapter. I didn’t expect it to take 100,000 words to finally get to these two crazy kids alone together again, but then again, my stories have a way of getting bigger than I intended.
I hope you enjoy the two chapters and I look forward to reading your thoughts.
Lauren
P.S. Only one chapter left, and I plan to have this story done by August. Let’s see if I can manage to achieve that goal.