The bandanna from ch. 1!! amedamacherryApril 2 2020, 20:23:36 UTC
Lightning's not the only Crazy Bitch here. Two chapters on one day again? I'm as surprised as I'm delighted ❤ Again, I love the way you sprinkle in background knowledge and (seemingly unimportant) information into the story. Prove that you do have a perfect plan about what is going to happen in the later chapters and that you do develop things logically. And the details (such as the fact that Lightnings hair color might give her away) show how much you care! Even though this chapter is mostly about preparing for the action, you never forget to place some fan service here and there! (Oh yeah, Snow is a Cutie Pie!!! That man's too good to be true!) Must be the Calm Before the Storm 😁 I can't wait for the action! Take care! ❤
Re: The bandanna from ch. 1!! frkmgnt1April 5 2020, 06:42:26 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I really liked the way the scene with Light and Snow turned out. And yeah, Snow owns my soul at this point.
I'm happy you liked the chapter. I'm working on Chapter 14, so hopefully it'll be up early next week. If I can manage that... well, let's just say that I think you'll be happy with what comes next.
Ohhh man I found this story as a teenager and have only just found it again now! I hope that you continue this series! I played final fantasy as a kid and automatically was like "yeah, these two go together." Your story is by far one of the best for this ship and I've been hooked on this series for a long time now!
I'm posting another chapter today. I'm finishing up this story in the next few weeks. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for taking the time to read it and comment.
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Again, I love the way you sprinkle in background knowledge and (seemingly unimportant) information into the story. Prove that you do have a perfect plan about what is going to happen in the later chapters and that you do develop things logically. And the details (such as the fact that Lightnings hair color might give her away) show how much you care!
Even though this chapter is mostly about preparing for the action, you never forget to place some fan service here and there! (Oh yeah, Snow is a Cutie Pie!!! That man's too good to be true!)
Must be the Calm Before the Storm 😁
I can't wait for the action!
Take care! ❤
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I'm happy you liked the chapter. I'm working on Chapter 14, so hopefully it'll be up early next week. If I can manage that... well, let's just say that I think you'll be happy with what comes next.
Have a great Sunday. Stay safe and healthy!
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