Fic: Do I Dare Disturb the Universe? Chapter 12: I Am Lazarus Pt 1

Mar 29, 2020 13:06


Disclaimer: Plot mine; characters not mine.

Remember when I said I was back? Yeah. Well, this is the second chapter in less than 48 hours. I think this is the chapter most of my readers were hoping Chapter 10 would be.

"The bitterest tears shed over graves are for words left unsaid and deeds left undone."
~Harriet Beecher Stowe

~12~
I Am Lazarus

Odin.

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writing, ffxiii, do i dare disturb the universe?, fanfiction

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FINALLY amedamacherry March 29 2020, 19:39:16 UTC
Awwww, you were right! This is what I've been waiting for!
FOR YEARS!
And don't tell me YOU were not! For you wrote this chapter so fast it was either one hell of a double night shift or it was outlined so crystal clear in your head you just needed to type it down! (Most probably it was both.)

A heartwarming reunion, well deserved! It feels like Lightning didn't laugh in centuries. And kIssing! Oh, the kissing!
It seems so funny now that Odins point of view is known, how much Lightning misunderstands her creepy silent knight.

Anyway, this made up for the long wait! I wasn't sure whether you were ever going to finish this story and I'm so happy you're on it now! THANK YOU!

(TBC - I'm goint to comment on part 2 as well.)

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