Eeeeeeeeeeeeee oh I love this! *shivers* The whole atmosphere is chilling, and Neal's state of mind as he's trying to hold onto her and slowly slipping away. And ghost!Kate is very creepy ... it's clear from the beginning that something is subtly off about her, and then the ending ... *shivers again* Love it!
And WOW, what an interesting and scary concept. Love it. It literally gave me chills, I could almost feel the cold in everything Kate did. Poor Neal...
Heee... I strongly believe that posting WC fanfic has the level of importance equal to a matter of life and death (for fanfic-starved readers :P)... so it's not stealing, it's an emergency procedure :P
Thank you very much! I'm really happy you enjoyed this :) Although, I'm afraid I'm one of those annoying people who enjoy writing ambiguous endings every now and then ;D
Meeeeep! This is really creepy and lovely -- it has a good old-fashioned ghost story vibe to it. (I don't know if this was intentional or not, but I also really love how the meaning of the title twists at the end, from Kate to Peter.)
Yes, I was meaning that with the title :D And also that being "watched over" isn't always a good thing...
And thank you very much!! I really enjoyed writing this. I think Neal would try to go on trusting Kate even past the point he knew it wasn't a good idea, so I was playing around with that.
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And WOW, what an interesting and scary concept. Love it. It literally gave me chills, I could almost feel the cold in everything Kate did. Poor Neal...
Thank you for this :D ♥
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And thank you very much! I had fun writing this. I don't really subscribe to the Kate-was-evil school of thought, but after death all bets are off :>
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*hugs*
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And thank you very much!! I really enjoyed writing this. I think Neal would try to go on trusting Kate even past the point he knew it wasn't a good idea, so I was playing around with that.
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nicely done!
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