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FIC: "Labour"

Sep 13, 2003 16:18

First time in three days I got to computer.
If I keep editing and editing and editing this I will probably delete the whole story because god I don't like it. But as I never like anything I write... Here.

TITLE: Labour (2/3)
AUTHOR: Frisky
PAIRING: Frodo/Aragorn
RATING: PG
WARNINGS: Slash. Little bits of angst and fluff. Attempts at humour.
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Comments 9

claudia603 September 13 2003, 14:13:56 UTC

Almost there! Almost there! Wow, I sure didn't know Frodo knew as many obscenities as he does, either. Rather shocked, I am :-D. And don't you dare let Aragorn leave him! He put Frodo into this position and he's going to sit there and endure all the blood like a man! :-D

frisky_journal September 21 2003, 12:41:52 UTC

Ye're not the only one shocked, let me assure ye. I've never known my Frodo can be that grumpy and impatient. I don't think Aragorn would leave Frodo even if he were pulled away by the whole Fellowship.... ;) Thanks for reviewing, dear!

shirebound September 13 2003, 14:18:09 UTC

"This is NOT Frodo," he said dumbly. "Frodo would never say such words."

Heeheehee

frisky_journal September 21 2003, 12:38:37 UTC

Thank you, dear! :)

elbereth1368 September 13 2003, 16:49:30 UTC

"This is NOT Frodo," he said dumbly. "Frodo would never say such words."

I quote Shirebound in laughing at that particular phrase.

I love your Frodo, his impatience is something that really seems to fit here, and it is always seems the quiet, humbled ones that have the largest fits (cursing) when something bad or painful happens. Gosh, I just love Laboring!Frodo.

frisky_journal September 21 2003, 12:39:22 UTC

Thank you very much, I think I will provide more labouring!Frodo.... in few..... weeks? Years?.... Hmmm... :)

hanarobi September 14 2003, 02:35:52 UTC

Favorite line? "Stop stressing my hobbit."

Just wonderful...so glad to see my beloved pillow!Frodo again. But he's hurting. Not good. Poor pillow!Frodo. Need the next chapter soon so the birth can be over (no?) and hurting!Frodo can go back to being grumbling!Frodo.

Also, really loved the bit with Pippin and Merry and Sam.

frisky_journal September 21 2003, 13:01:27 UTC

Thank you VERY-VERy much for mentioning Pippin-Merry-Sam bit! :)

lilybaggins September 22 2003, 17:19:56 UTC

Oh, I NEED part three! I adored Aragorn's calm edict to the healers, and Frodo's moans and groans and such... and especially the detail.

But Aragorn had better not go and leave Frodo alone, or I'll be after him---that would be unforgivable! Anyway, please give us more... needing it badly. This is delicious.