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Glimmering

Feb 05, 2010 14:26

TITLE: Glimmering
AUTHOR: heatherbird
PAIRING: Peter/Olivia
CATEGORY/RATING: Angst, G
WORD COUNT/SUMMARY: 875; The end of "Jacksonville" from Olivia's POV
SPOILERS: Set within "Jacksonville"
DISCLAIMER: Characters belong to J.J. Abrams & Co. This is my first Fringe fic.

( the pieces were falling into place... )

c: olivia, c: peter, p: peter/olivia, genre: angst

Comments 4

spaciireth February 5 2010, 20:55:42 UTC

This is heartbreaking, as was that moment in the episode. You've explored Olivia's feelings very well. I'm hoping to do the same with something I'm writing, but I think this one is better.

puguita February 5 2010, 21:49:04 UTC

Wow, I really loved this. Plus I needed some kind of closure after last night, so thank you very much :)

heatherbird February 5 2010, 22:40:13 UTC

thanks so much!

heatherbird February 5 2010, 22:32:27 UTC

Thank you for your kind comment! I thought the actors did such a great job of conveying the mix of emotions in these scenes and I tried to translate their body language into words :)