Eighteen (5/5)
anonymous
October 31 2011, 01:52:24 UTC
“Anyway, I’m meeting her for a movie.”
“So was that was this was about?” he asked, feeling his own tiny twinge of annoyance. He didn’t mind furious jealousy-fueled fucking, but he didn’t particularly care for being used either. “Clearing out the ole chamber so you don’t shoot too early later on?”
“Um…” Charley look distinctly uncomfortable.
“Suppose I’m more fun than a wank, anyway. But you know…” He chose his next words carefully, not sure how much he wanted to rock the boat, but decided he couldn’t let the kid think he was that oblivious. He stood and approached Charley, leaning in close to say hotly by the other man’s ear, “It didn’t really feel like just getting one out of the way. It felt like you were… staking a claim.”
Charley paused while buttoning his shirt. “I… don’t know what you’re talking about, dude. The only thing I stake is vampires.”
Peter felt the urge to make a saucy pun, but he resisted it, just. The mood wasn’t right.
“All right, fine. Go have fun on your date.”
“Look, I just wanted to fuck, that’s all.” Someone was getting defensive.
“Isn’t that what your lady friend is for?”
“Yeah, well… she’s not a sure thing.” Was Charley trying to wound him? For being a man-slut? That was almost… cute.
Peter laughed, all annoyance gone. He supposed they would need to have A Talk pretty soon, but for now, he’d be happy to fuck it out when issues came up. He reached out and ruffled Charley’s hair.
“Oh Charley, sometimes I forget how very young you are.”
Re: Eighteen (5/5)
anonymous
November 1 2011, 00:56:17 UTC
Wow! That was amazing. Confused relationship, brilliant characterisations and fucking hot! Loved how free their 'thing' is but also passionate and inevitable like it will always be there, something fierce and indomitable that will last no matter how much they fight or drift. Really well written, so many layers and stuff to make you think amid what would otherwise just be ol fashioned porn! Would so love to see you write more of these two, charley turning the tables, discussion and insecurity and more predatory make up sex!!!! Thanks so much!
Re: Eighteen (5/5) - OP here
anonymous
November 2 2011, 13:55:31 UTC
Hooray! Thank you so much for tackling this one anon, I know it must have been difficult to write this between these two and keep them in character, but you did it! I love that Charley is frustrated by his own feelings but still plays it off cool (for the most part), and I love that Peter is flattered and amused when Charley can no longer hold it in (so to speak). I just...I love them both so much!!!! And you, for filling this. :)
Re: Eighteen (5/5) - OP here
anonymous
November 2 2011, 18:04:06 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah it was a little difficult. Feelings is tricky things. Especially with these guys. And when it's a kinkmeme and maybe should be all about hot sex! ;)
Thank YOU for this prompt. It was nice living with it in my head for a while. :D
“So was that was this was about?” he asked, feeling his own tiny twinge of annoyance. He didn’t mind furious jealousy-fueled fucking, but he didn’t particularly care for being used either. “Clearing out the ole chamber so you don’t shoot too early later on?”
“Um…” Charley look distinctly uncomfortable.
“Suppose I’m more fun than a wank, anyway. But you know…” He chose his next words carefully, not sure how much he wanted to rock the boat, but decided he couldn’t let the kid think he was that oblivious. He stood and approached Charley, leaning in close to say hotly by the other man’s ear, “It didn’t really feel like just getting one out of the way. It felt like you were… staking a claim.”
Charley paused while buttoning his shirt. “I… don’t know what you’re talking about, dude. The only thing I stake is vampires.”
Peter felt the urge to make a saucy pun, but he resisted it, just. The mood wasn’t right.
“All right, fine. Go have fun on your date.”
“Look, I just wanted to fuck, that’s all.” Someone was getting defensive.
“Isn’t that what your lady friend is for?”
“Yeah, well… she’s not a sure thing.” Was Charley trying to wound him? For being a man-slut? That was almost… cute.
Peter laughed, all annoyance gone. He supposed they would need to have A Talk pretty soon, but for now, he’d be happy to fuck it out when issues came up. He reached out and ruffled Charley’s hair.
“Oh Charley, sometimes I forget how very young you are.”
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I have written a handful of Peter/Charley things so far, but this one is certainly the most...involved. There may yet be more in this continuity.
Again, thanks for the lovely comment.
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Thank YOU for this prompt. It was nice living with it in my head for a while. :D
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