Fic: Smell

[frickin_cheng]

Title: Smell

Summary: Sometimes Kakashi just can’t deal with the mission aftermath

Rating: worksafe, just really angsty.

A/N eh…not to pleased with this story, feels like its missing something, but I just had to get it out. *shrugs*

Comments

[stinky_horowitz]

I think you should have kept to Kakashi's POV throughout, because the switch to Minato's POV is rather abrupt and Kakashi comes off as somewhat pathetic thereafter. I find myself taking Kakashi's break less seriously, when I was really into it before Minato showed up. You switch back to Kakashi for a couple of sentences, and I really wanted that to continue. I wanted to feel Kakashi's decision to trust him, to trust that it's okay to touch Minato, rather than seeing that part via a much calmer Minato.

Still like it though.