One Step at a time: 21st Chapter

[freyjam]

Pairings: tetsu x hyde
Rating: n-17
Disclaimer: You're kidding, right? Don't own. As in, at all.
Summary: A (hopefully) enormously long story of L'Arc~en~Ciel as seen from the perspective of a Tetsuhai fan

Comments

[freyjam]

It made you cringe? :( I do admit it went differently from what I initially planned. The 'roles' were supposed to be about what was happening between Sakura and Hyde, with the TetsuHai part being just a... side thingy. But then it kind of went out of control...

Ah well, I'm glad you still enjoyed it :)

[freyjam]

Ah, I get it. I can sympathize completely, actually :) Don't worry, it'll stay very much TetsuHai from now on, as the purpose of the scene was partly to show that they prefer it like that anyway XD
I just didn't want the whole thing to look more one-sided than it really is :)

[a_deux_vitesses]

I enjoyed this chapter :) Hyde's and Sakura's little competition is fun to picture and I'm looking forward to seeing Sakura's reaction to Hyde's new tactics XD

Wasn't expecting this chapter to be Haitsu, but still, it was nice~

[freyjam]

Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I like surprising people, so I take that as a compliment ;P

[dohai_love]

DUDE THIS WAS SOO AWESOME. I only read this one, since it has porn in it, LOL, but it was great, everything. Major lulz @ Sakura treating Hyde like a gentleman. Also, I could picture Hyde's O_O; face when Tetsu asked him to be on top, PERFECTLY. :DDD I'll have to go back and read this whole thing. HAITSU FOREVER. <333

[freyjam]

XD Trust smut to lure you in here, lol. I am glad you liked it though and got some lulz out of it XD And I'd actually say TETSUHAI FOREVER :P

[dohai_love]

Oh, I didn't expect you to reply so soon lol! How's your mini vacation going? I miss you sooo much. D:

YES lol, I'm a smut freak, only because I haven't read it in so long. D: Of course, there's plenty of lulz, I'm on Chap. 3 at the moment and totally loving this, I'm upset it doesn't have more comments, it's really brilliant!!! :O Have you posted this on the L'arc community? I mean honestly, this is the most well written L'arc fic I've read since killingsound stopped writing. XDD I don't really care who's on top, so they both work for me. :P

[freyjam]

It's going very well, I'm having lots of fun though I also worry about a lot of stuff... but it's a very long story >_> I do glance at skype every once in a while to see if you're there just to say hello or smth, but haven't seen you, actually :( Not that I'm spending that much time at the computer anyway XD

*blushes a bit* Thank you, dear, it's a huge compliment to read that :) And, hmm, I don't remember if I posted it on the comm. I might have, for the first chapter only though. I don't want to spam the comm when there are others specializing in fiction.

Also, if you like smut, you can check this out. OR radhaj  stuff. That's at LEAST as good in quality as my fics, so if you liked mine....

[write_my_dreams]

I adored Hyde's mom teasing them about underwear. So cute. Sakura treating Hyde like a princess was cute/funny, I can see Hyde's pouty look so clearly.

I wasn't expecting Hyde to be the dominant one, but I'm glad you included it. It annoys me when the roles stay the exact same way... it's really not realistic. I think these two will both be tired the next day XD

[freyjam]

I tried to include the fact that they at least tried to try things the other way around. I don't know if I'll actually write them ever repeating the experiment though - they might do it in privacy, but I like writing Tetsu on top quite a bit more :)

[write_my_dreams]

I really liked that you did that. Oh that's fine :) I switch things up sometimes but I usually prefer to write (and read) Hyde on bottom