Traces - Part 2

[freya922]

Title: Traces
Fandom: Supernatural
Author: Freya922
Characters: Dean, Sam, John, Castiel, Pastor Jim, Bobby
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for adult language and character death (sort of)
Disclaimer: Obviously, I own nothing, but am grateful to walk in this astounding world others have created.

This continues the story begun in Part 1It seemed so wrong

Comments

[carocali]

Wonderful time travel. I love how you played with all the elements but it still came back to the present and nothing had changed. Wonderful portrayal of Jim - gone too soon - and the quick cameo by Bobby. Really well written and tense. When Sam died you had me squirming. Lovely work!

;D
Caroline

[freya922]

Thank you so much, Caroline. I'm so glad you enjoyed the whole 'change everything yet bring it back to unchanged' thing. :) I appreciate your kind comments!

Freya

[agelade]

Oh wow, I love the use of Jim here. Cas was so smart using that demon though, and the promise that Pastor Jim would live his full life and that Cas would try to get him out, gosh. I loved all of this.

[freya922]

Thanks so much for reading, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! This was my first Supernatural fic, so I'm especially pleased that you found it worthwhile. :)

[serena64]

What a fantastic story. This is the best thing I've read for ages.

[freya922]

I thank you so much for reading and for making such a gracious comment. This was my first Supernatural story...

Freya

[brightly_lit]

Ahh ... great. LOVE the h/c, John's attempts to do right by Dean but unable to, so overcome with his own issues. I especially loved the flashbacks. The relationship between young Sam and Dean was so very sweet. I hope you write a lot more!

[freya922]

Thank you so much for checking the story out, as I am pretty new to the fandom and the fic, too. I appreciate the encouraging comments very much! :)

[amberdreams]

Yay! First congrats on your first SPN story and second, kudos for writing such an interesting twist. I love it when writers bring to life a character like Jim, that the show itself under used and got rid of early. It's very satisfying.

And... a very Happy Birthday to You!!!

[freya922]

Thank you so much, Amber, both for the kind comments and the birthday greetings. You rock! :)