Fic: Autumn Nights - The second night

[freshtilapia]

Title: The Second Night-In Which Quinn Fabray Hides Her True Feelings For Rachel Berry-Not That She Wants To-It's Just More Fun (And Tiring) 
Author: freshtilapia
Rating: NC-17 (for the whole series)
Length: 2,858
Spoilers: Season 1 & 2 
Summary: (see Title; or the sequel to Summer Mornings, with the usual fluff and the promise of sex)
A/N: This time it's from

Comments

[vsquared_k]

Oooooo!! Grins!!! I like causing grins!! :D So I counted the number of 'o''s you used in your 'so''s, and they're identical to mine in my previous comment... coincidence? I think not... (I'M NOT OCD I SWEAR okay, maybe a little)

i) There are so many dramatricks fics... any hints you would like to give as to plot and such? I will gladly forego studying and passing university to help you find the fic you forgot!

ii) Stalker!Santana excites me, in completely amazing ways.

iii) I feel like the funny in AN is one that builds, as opposed to SM... possibly because it's not Rachel's quirky mind, but Quinn's slightly more cynical one? But I'm sure it will build to a startlingly amazing funniness, if you let it!

iv) I will never be able to look at the word essay with a straight face again... thanks for that.

v) I wanted to give you a bigger list, actually, of, like, 10 things, but I was dragged away by a car before I could.

Rest assured there will be comments on the awesomeness of the rest of your story when you post next week, and the weeks afterwards :)

[freshtilapia]

Hahaha Very observant! :D I am pretty deliberate, most of the time. And that goes for writing, too. I usually just try to mirror the format of a comment. It makes it easier for me to reply...

i) Dramatricks' fic I referenced is "Like a Seal Upon Your Heart," w/c can be found in ff.net. It's not the one I forgot and it's a good thing that someone else already told me what it is 'coz I do not want you to forgo studying often and I definitely want you to graduate.

ii) Haha I wish you can have stalker!Santana longer but I don't think you will.

iii) Well, I hope I can find ways to make this funnier. SM was such a joy to write 'coz Rachel is so silly that when I think of a scenario, I had to make it at least twice as silly. That was what's so fun for me. It had to be ridiculous. AN is so grounded because of Quinn. She's the realist of the two, IMO. So I try to get away with moments when I can make her look foolish.

iv) Bwahaha essay, essay, essay... you're welcome ;)

v) I'm so happy knowing that there are 5 more things about this that you like.

Again, thank you so much.