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Fic: Autumn Nights - The seventh night - Part 2

Sep 16, 2011 00:58

Title: The Seventh Night-In Which Quinn Fabray Resists The Urge-To Get Into Rachel Berry's Pants-And The Irony Of Rachel Wearing Skirts (And Other Forms Of Torture)
A/N: Haaave you read Part 1?

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mm_burnttoast September 15 2011, 23:20:36 UTC

“Girlfriend as in girl friend-like ‘Wassup girlfriend!’” I loved, loved, loved this line. Super funny! And I'm glad that everyone took it well, except for Finn of course, but he's dumb and I don't care about him so... And the last part was great.

freshtilapia September 16 2011, 11:49:47 UTC

Hahaha I didn't think it was that funny but I'm happy that you loved it :D

darksyx September 16 2011, 16:41:33 UTC

I’m sure he now thinks Quinn likes him. What a moron. And in character, I may say.

What?! “Are you a moron?”Yep. I could be Quinn’s conscience.

“What radio station do you listen to?” This explain that bit in part 1. I was wondering how Quinn knew Schuester’s radio preferences.

The choir room scene only was worthy of all my excitement about this update. Hahahaha. Horny Quinn and all =D The slight Brittana is a nice touch too.

I could never make out in front of my parents. Tsk, tsk. XD

Judy Garland… Only Rachel. *snorts* But so glad to see the effect of Judy catching the girls and all is going to that. Awww.

I was enraptured by the make-out passage, where were we… oh, thongs again. Nice elastic thongs.

Oh. You gotta love when Rachel falls in the mode of passion. *laughs*

freshtilapia September 17 2011, 08:54:47 UTC

LOL Yes, you can be Quinn's conscience.

Yeah! *fistpump* (at the choir room scene being worthy of your excitement)

I dunno really, somehow in my head, they just did it. But if I really think about it, I'm sure they've made out somewhat discreetly while having movie nights with the daddies.

My favorite joke in this night lol

Yeah, I just couldn't let the subject of the thongs go. lol IMO, best make out I've written. Happy to have captivated you :D

Oh. Hahaha

shesfiiine September 18 2011, 11:41:06 UTC

Ohh, hiii babyyy… I’ve missed you… Mmm, I’ve missed you… I’ve missed you so much… you and your lips… God, that feels so good… Mmm… Need… flat… surface… now… No, no, don’t pull away yet! Want… more… kiss-

I LOVE this!!!

freshtilapia September 18 2011, 12:25:01 UTC

LOL it's one of my favorite bits. I'm so happy you love it! :D Thank you so much.

Have you read Part 3?

shesfiiine September 18 2011, 15:41:25 UTC

Yes just finished part 3 :-)

So glad you found your muse again