Fill Girl POV prompt by Moerlin

Dec 06, 2012 23:00


Title:  Fill for a prompt by Moerlin, Girl POV
Author: Fremi08
Rating:  PG
Disclaimer:  I don't own any of the characters and mean no harm.

So, this is my first fanfic ever. I know it's not very good, but hey, I tried. Please be gentle... I could use some encouragement ;-).
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Wow, Amanda thought to ( Read more... )

drabble-a-thon, atwt, lure, fanfic

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Comments 19

ltklo December 6 2012, 23:10:22 UTC
I like how you described Amanda's fond feelings for Luke. And great idea to give her a little bit of Casey at the end :)

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fremi08 December 7 2012, 08:05:23 UTC
Thank you! I always thought Casey could do a lot better than Alison ;-).

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moerlin December 6 2012, 23:34:43 UTC
Aww, yay, I'm so glad you wrote this! It's lovely, and I like Amanda already. Too bad things could never work out with Luke, but it seems they're both well on their way to happiness (or, well, Luke's already there ;)).

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fremi08 December 7 2012, 08:00:13 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

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sleeper6 December 7 2012, 02:06:07 UTC
This is absolutely lovely! I'm glad Amanda is happy for Luke. Hope she finds some happiness too. :)

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fremi08 December 7 2012, 07:59:42 UTC
I hope so too :-). Thanks so much!

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kccalgal December 7 2012, 04:46:43 UTC
What a great little ficlet. Happiness was all over Luke's face. Hopefully Casey can put that happy smile on Amanda.

Keep writing! This was really good!

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fremi08 December 7 2012, 07:59:05 UTC
Thank you! That means a lot coming from you!

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lurelei December 7 2012, 08:39:36 UTC
This is so sweet! I could see Amanda reliving things. 'She just wanted him to be able to be himself and just be happy.'
I feel like I was sitting in that booth in the far corner, you know, the one with the good view... Congrats on your first ficlet, hope more will follow!

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fremi08 December 7 2012, 11:32:13 UTC
Thanks you for your sweet comment! I am planning on writing more, I enjoyed it very much.

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