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3 x Arthur did not kiss Gwen when it was raining & 3 x he did, Gwen/Arthur, G, futurequeen challenge

Aug 28, 2009 17:27

Title:Three times Arthur did not kiss Gwen when it was raining, and three times he did
Author: kepp0xy
Rating: G
Characters/Pairing: Arthur/Gwen
Warning: angst, hurt/comfort, fluff
Summary: I think the title is fairly selfexplanatory ;]

Author's Note: written for the Gwen battle summer 2009 happening at thefuturequeen Prompt: Arthur/Gwen, kisses in the rain. Comments ( Read more... )

type: future!fic, merlin: gwen, type: het, merlin: pairing - gwen/arthur, merlin: arthur, type: challenge response, merlin

Comments 38

robinmarian August 29 2009, 04:12:18 UTC

flailing around like a seal here (copyright anakisa LOL
and I havent even read it yet. The title is already love. haha

kepp0xy August 30 2009, 05:33:52 UTC

:] ♥

anakisa August 30 2009, 13:35:55 UTC

lol you don't need to give credit :)

robinmarian August 29 2009, 04:58:42 UTC

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! OMG!!! This was sooooo good Kelly!! Sooo cute and romantic and sweet!! I love it from start to finish but I gotta say my fave part is the last one. haha for a sec there I thought Arthur was going to play tag with the children and then Gwen will soon join in. hahaha Heeeeeeeeeeee the kisses they shared were all nice. Gave me lots of butterflies in my tummy.

Thanks for this wonderful fic Kelly. You're one of my fave Arwen writers u know. You just come up with the best Arwen stories! I hope you never stop writing! haha

kepp0xy August 30 2009, 05:35:17 UTC

Thanks, Jhing! It would be very cute if Arthur were to play tag with children; we've never seen him looking so light and carefree.

Thank you, you're so sweet. I'm glad you enjoyed :D!

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kepp0xy August 30 2009, 05:35:31 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

archaeologist_d August 29 2009, 12:29:54 UTC

Very sweet. I liked the slow way they grew closer and how the rain and the kisses seemed to go together. Well done!

kepp0xy August 30 2009, 05:36:23 UTC

Yes, one of my favourite parts of the Arthur/Gwen ship is how they're taking the relationship at a slow burn. Thanks so much for the lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed!

la_esmeralda_ August 29 2009, 13:12:33 UTC

I wish it were possible for me to love the second kiss one less. The symbolism and the new start and her belief in him and everyone accepting her, and, oh, *melts*. It's just a beautiful, epic image.

But the whole fic's lovely - Arthur being denied the kisses in the first three is both sweet and funny at the same time!

Have I mentioned recently I adore the way you write these two?

kepp0xy August 30 2009, 18:21:04 UTC

Thank you so much! That was actually the first I wrote, and it's probably my favourite too. I'm really glad all that came across; there's potentially so much to convey with Arthur/Gwen that I always think I'm missing major attributes.

I firmly believe that Arthur needs certain things denied him (that is, things outside Uther's direct realm of control) It does him good. And entertains us >:D

♥ ♥ ♥!

On a similar note: I'm really looking forward to reading more of your stuff! *not so subtle hint ;P*