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Aug 14, 2011 00:49

Give me a link to one of my fics, and I'll give you details that didn't make it into the fic. Background canon, deleted scenes, or a look into the future. My choice, but if you have a specific question you can ask it in your request.
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doojoon/hyunseung freefallskyline August 15 2011, 04:00:23 UTC
I started this for a challenge on the meme, but I ran out of time and then just never finished it. I don't like it very much, which is probably another reason why I stopped. I mostly wanted to write this because I'm kind of fascinated by Doojoon/Hyunseung; like, I never really thought of them as particularly close or anything, but after Hyunseung got a Twitter, they seemed to be talking to each other all the time, which made me rethink a lot of things.

So, as per the prompt, the premise is basically that Hyunseung falls in love with Doojoon while he's not physically around. They talk a lot through text (and Twitter, I guess), and get to know each other better that way. I always imagine Hyunseung sitting in the dark, texting Doojoon and waiting for a reply, only the cell phone light illuminating his face. And, like, you know how things are different when you communicate via technology and when you communicate face-to-face? Hyunseung would have that problem because he would be used to telling Doojoon things through text that he maybe wouldn't know how to translate into a real life conversation (or he wouldn't feel comfortable saying), so things would get awkward but Doojoon wouldn't know why. Obviously, they would have worked it out in the end.

You know, in your absence, I fell in love with you. How wrong is that?

All the members are busy enough with their own schedules that Doojoon's absence due to All My Love filming is only prominently noticed for a fortnight, or maybe less. After that, it becomes expected that certain members are going to be out on certain days, and no one really needs to ask anymore. Yoseob and Gikwang are often busy with schedules of their own, and of the leftover members, Hyunseung feels Doojoon's absence the most.

It's not so much that he doesn't have friends of his own, because he does, but more that he's become used to his members and the way they fit into his living space, breathing space, talking-in-your-ear-when-you-want-to-sleep space. They are comfortable, and Hyunseung is comfortable having them around; he is content to sit on the floor watching Greatest Love, his back against Doojoon's leg, Gikwang to his left, Yoseob curled up in a corner, Dongwoon taking selcas with his cell phone as his head rests on Gikwang's shoulder, Junhyung manoeuvring to be as close to Yoseob as possible.

So, because All My Love takes up so much (too much) of Doojoon's time and Hyunseung is supposed to be asleep by the time Doojoon gets home, sometimes, he resorts to texting, though he does it tentatively at first, and only when he's really bored, in case Doojoon is busy. As it turns out, Doojoon has plenty of time to spare during filming

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Re: doojoon/hyunseung envoler August 15 2011, 19:00:45 UTC
omg viva, you have to finish this T___________T your premise makes my heart hurt in all the right places :(((((((((((

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