post season 4 finale ficlet

Feb 24, 2007 21:18

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Author: fredsmith518
Beta: please tell me if I’ve dropped any major clangers, geography wise, I used a map...
Rating:tame
Disclaimer: Nothing owned.
Summary: So, last episode and I thought I was okay with that ( Read more... )

post season 4 finale fic

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ctoan February 24 2007, 22:15:04 UTC
I really liked this. I especially liked the explanation for Kirsten, because while on the surface, it does seem like she takes a hands off approach, 1) she is more reserved than Sandy and Seth (and she takes a hands off approach with Seth mostly too) and 2) that does make sense, that he'd not say no to her and she'd want to give him a chance.

Good one, Fred!

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fredsmith518 February 24 2007, 22:20:59 UTC
Thank you:)

I was daydreaming in the car, passenger, and started to think about Sandy and Ryan meeting up for lunch and it evolved and the part you cite, Kirsten's motivations ecame the centre for me, but I know you figured that out already!

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maudgonne February 24 2007, 22:17:52 UTC
I love the idea of Ryan and Sandy hanging out on campus! And he was coming home anyway. Thanks--this was a very satisfying read.

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fredsmith518 February 24 2007, 22:22:37 UTC
Thank you:)
Love the icon

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ctoan February 24 2007, 22:37:16 UTC
STOP FOLLOWING ME AROUND!

(Hi Fred! :) Don't mind us.)

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maudgonne February 24 2007, 22:38:35 UTC
I REPEAT: I ONLY LIKED YOU FOR YOUR FLOOR PLANS.

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katwoman76 February 24 2007, 22:26:06 UTC
I loved this a lot.
And I had a big fat satisfied smile on my face the whole time reading it.

Thank you.

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fredsmith518 February 24 2007, 22:33:35 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, thank you for telling me:)

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zbyszko February 24 2007, 22:38:45 UTC
I love them hanging out on campus. And the thought of Ryan babysitting is too cute. And your explanation of Kirsten is excellent.

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fredsmith518 February 24 2007, 22:44:15 UTC
Thank you:)
I'm resisting the urge to fiddle with it and add stuff. That always happens when I write and then post.
Babysitting Ryan...runs away from possible series of ficlets, stores up good idea for future reference.

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yessi_5 February 24 2007, 23:13:16 UTC
*raises hand eagerly*
Me, me!

I was rambling about Sandy and Ryan having lunch earlier today. I think while replying to Chazper's comment about how great it is that Ryan will be with Kirsten and Sandy in Berkeley.

This is so great - I love that Ryan is doing so well and has a bunch of friends there and you did a great job describing the little changes in him, like asking directly when something is bothering him.

And I so want him to babysit little Sophie and hang out with the Cohens. I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy now, and it's a nice change to the constant crying ;-)

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fredsmith518 February 24 2007, 23:27:58 UTC
You?! Well, thank you, I shall have to go investigate, see if you ahve any more good ideas to steal - kidding. Seriously, thank you for not minding.

I love the idea of Ryan close to Sandy, Kirsten and Sophie too. Remember they talked about getting an apartment to be near Seth and now they've landed up with ryan? Happy smile.

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yessi_5 February 25 2007, 11:17:16 UTC
How could I mind, this was lovely!

Happy smile indeed. So much potential for Cohens+1 there...

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