Living for the weekend

Jan 10, 2012 21:00

Title: 2 - Living for the weekend
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weekend, nando, football rps, dan

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vicky86x January 10 2012, 20:25:49 UTC
Awww, this is kind of sweet and adoring and still it broke my heart!

I actually like the idea of Dan and Fernando as brothers, but it still hurts to see that Fernando has feelings that he'll never be able to admit!

And I like the realistic ending, that he rather wants his feelings to go away, to not lose Dan, than to act out his desires and probably destroy what they have!

Two ficlets on one evening? you're spoiling us ;)

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littlesumo January 10 2012, 20:39:47 UTC
Thank you! :D

From now on it'll really be one ficlet per weekend :)

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tetila January 10 2012, 20:27:19 UTC
You're a mean person. MEAN!

But I liked it. It works out perfectly in my mind^^

Freckly brothers ♥

Thanks for doing this!

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littlesumo January 10 2012, 20:39:59 UTC
^^

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hope_and_heart January 10 2012, 20:36:51 UTC
You know I'm kind of worried that I wanted more of this. I for one totally would have been cool with him taking things further even though, deep down, I'm glad he didn't.
It's wrong but oh so right and adorable all at the same time. I think it's so cute because Fernando is determined not to let anything happen.
I also really like the idea of Fernando and Dan as brothers. Like more than I should :P Great stuff hun <3

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littlesumo January 10 2012, 20:41:30 UTC
I had originally planned to have Fernando act upon it but then I decided against it. I think I feel more comfortable with it (for now) ;)
Thank you :)

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littlesumo January 11 2012, 17:32:54 UTC
I should probably put the number first :)

Thanks for reading after you figured it out ;)

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narya86 January 10 2012, 22:20:53 UTC
WHAT! It can't end here! D: That's no ending!!

*cough* As you can maybe see though, you totally had me here. And I'm really, really glad that you wrote it with these two after all. :)

Buuut... a sequel actually would be awesome. ;)

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littlesumo January 11 2012, 17:37:39 UTC
It's not?

I wasn't expecting people to like this, I'd rather thought you'd all go "ewww" ;)

We'll see, maybe :)

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narya86 January 11 2012, 18:04:39 UTC
Tbh, I wouldn't have minded even if they were brothers by blood... ^^

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littlesumo January 11 2012, 18:36:00 UTC
Sheesh ;)

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