Awww, this is kind of sweet and adoring and still it broke my heart!
I actually like the idea of Dan and Fernando as brothers, but it still hurts to see that Fernando has feelings that he'll never be able to admit!
And I like the realistic ending, that he rather wants his feelings to go away, to not lose Dan, than to act out his desires and probably destroy what they have!
You know I'm kind of worried that I wanted more of this. I for one totally would have been cool with him taking things further even though, deep down, I'm glad he didn't. It's wrong but oh so right and adorable all at the same time. I think it's so cute because Fernando is determined not to let anything happen. I also really like the idea of Fernando and Dan as brothers. Like more than I should :P Great stuff hun <3
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I actually like the idea of Dan and Fernando as brothers, but it still hurts to see that Fernando has feelings that he'll never be able to admit!
And I like the realistic ending, that he rather wants his feelings to go away, to not lose Dan, than to act out his desires and probably destroy what they have!
Two ficlets on one evening? you're spoiling us ;)
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From now on it'll really be one ficlet per weekend :)
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But I liked it. It works out perfectly in my mind^^
Freckly brothers ♥
Thanks for doing this!
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It's wrong but oh so right and adorable all at the same time. I think it's so cute because Fernando is determined not to let anything happen.
I also really like the idea of Fernando and Dan as brothers. Like more than I should :P Great stuff hun <3
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Thank you :)
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Thanks for reading after you figured it out ;)
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*cough* As you can maybe see though, you totally had me here. And I'm really, really glad that you wrote it with these two after all. :)
Buuut... a sequel actually would be awesome. ;)
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I wasn't expecting people to like this, I'd rather thought you'd all go "ewww" ;)
We'll see, maybe :)
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