May 05, 2012 22:42
So okay,
The middle
I suppose it's not all bad.
there's the part where things come to a head, the climax, the other-sexual-metaphor-about-an-orgasm
you know
when things get good
There's that bit. Also the bit before that, where things are getting tense.
Tense is good too, the winding up feel useful and the best is when it's desperate
because the stakes have been raised
(seriously, what does that phrase even mean? Think about it in the literal sense. See?)
The bit before that is nice too, the getting to know you part
The exposition fairy comes and magics you into understanding the set-up
The Middle isn't terrible
it's just hard
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