Fic: Never Let Me Go (part 1)

[morelen]

Title: Never Let me Go (part 1)
Pairing: Frank/Dwayne
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: underage, incest; language, angst
Summary: Frank and Dwayne's first reunion after Frank moves out
Disclaimer: LMS is not mine
A/N: I will probably hang up my hat for this pairing after this fic, so this ought to wrap things up nicely.

Comments

[leftofield]

THIS WAS SO AWESOME!!!

It was literally the perfect amount of angst and comfort. I know it sounds weird but I loved that they cried. Like, that's the perfect release for all of the emotions they had been holding inside. The first time Dwayne broke down was just heartbreaking but I was really touched at Frank's line: "Because-because you love me."

And as always, the smut was phenomenal! :D

I can't wait to read the second part and see how you tie these two up! Great job, bb! :D

[morelen]

EEEEE! I'm so so so happy you liked it!! I am literally bouncing up and down :D Thanks so much!

[leftofield]

Of course, dear! You're welcome! <3333

[klair716]

That scene where Frank's beard is tickling Dwayne's tummy and then he looks up and describes Dwayne's smiling face as 'beatific' ? Yeah, that's definitely my favorite. I also really like how Dwayne's allowed to be loud now, lol.

It was all wonderful, like always. I'm excited for the next part.

[morelen]

I can't help myself when it comes to writing cute little scenes like that, lol. ^_^ I like them having the freedom, just the two of them, being happy. I also love the idea of someone so withdrawn turning out to be a screamer, haha, so I had to have him just let loose.

I'm really happy you liked it. :D Thank you so much!

[sgmystikspiral]

Ah, this was was absolutely brilliant. I was instantly reminded within a few lines why I love this ship so much. I have an overwhelming urge to grab the film and indulge in every single scene they share. Ah, your writing is beautiful and clear and descriptive and the way you describe their encounters had me both grinning and blushing

[morelen]

I can't even describe how happy your comment has made me. You haven't just made my day, but my whole month! Thanks so much for reading and replying. I'm overjoyed to have heard from you again. It means a lot to me. ♥ And if you ever do a video, please let me know!

[xenternameherex]

That was defiantly very awesome. They are a very oddly well suiting shipping couple that has a lot of chemistry that you really wrote it like a pro. :P

They have both kind of found solace and respect in this relative they might have been a little disconnected from in the past but then realized they can talk to each other and find each other interesting.

I suppose it could seem poorly, this older well educated man attracted to a teenager who he's know since infancy but I think Dwayne can hold his own against Frank very well. And that (as you touched on) he feels safe with Frank, and he does not feel judged. He knows Franks and intelligent man and I believe he thinks Frank see's the world like he does. (For example Richard's winner nonsense.) and being a man Franks age who's probably thinking he'll never get another exciting, sexy suitor, finding out a teenager is attracted to you is kind of an exciting thing.

That's just me rambling, but you are really ken on detail. Thanks for breathing some life back to the community.

[morelen]

Thank you so much! <3 What you wrote is pretty much how I see them and why I love them as a pairing.