a pome
so guys this is my fisrt peom... ive enterd it online and goten prety good reviews... umm tell me whatcha think about it, i kno my spellins bad, but ya kno@! key here it is:
she cries
by ebony
upstairs there she lies
a saddned heart ful of her goodbys
its her life
not tha worlds
and forthat reason
she cries
umm its kinda about corpret america and how when youve got tons a shit going on that you jsut ya kno have ta let it out and shit. its kinad about me and the shit that gos on... but hope ya like it!
TTYLatez,
______~~~EBZ~~~__________
she cries
by ebony
upstairs there she lies
a saddned heart ful of her goodbys
its her life
not tha worlds
and forthat reason
she cries
umm its kinda about corpret america and how when youve got tons a shit going on that you jsut ya kno have ta let it out and shit. its kinad about me and the shit that gos on... but hope ya like it!
TTYLatez,
______~~~EBZ~~~__________