a small story

Jun 16, 2011 12:00

I've been away for a long time, and don't know when I'll be able to "come back" fully. I miss LJ -- I miss keeping up with my friends here.

Today I wanted to write something, anything, with a beginning, middle, and end. This was the result. I don't know yet if I like it, and I feel nervous about posting it and then disappearing again. But I've been ( Read more... )

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enigmaticblues June 16 2011, 16:31:45 UTC
I love the layers in this. It really works on multiple levels.

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framefolly June 17 2011, 14:00:29 UTC
Thank you :)

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thisficklemob June 16 2011, 16:54:37 UTC
Oh. Oh.

This was simultaneously creepy and heartbreaking and then hopeful.

{{{hugs}}}

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framefolly June 17 2011, 14:01:06 UTC
{{{hugs back}}}

Thank you.

I'm glad I managed to be creepy ;)

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louise39 June 16 2011, 17:30:52 UTC
A whole lifetime without a name. How sad.

I do like the hope as her life begins anew.

[Nice to see you again.]

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framefolly June 17 2011, 14:02:08 UTC
Thank you! It feels good to post. I hope I can come back more and more.

Hope really is always at the bottom of the box, isn't it? I didn't expect it to be there, at the end of the story, but there it was anyway ;)

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petzipellepingo June 16 2011, 17:50:06 UTC
How nice to hear from you again.

That was sad and kindy creepy and then that sweet ending.

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framefolly June 17 2011, 14:02:42 UTC
Thank you! It feels good to post. I hope I'll be able to come back more and more.

I love your icon! It's perfectly June :)

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framefolly June 17 2011, 14:03:35 UTC
Thank you so much.

*hugs back*

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