Prologue - Kristy

Nov 01, 2003 01:11

November 1. 1:10 AM. 949 words.

let the madness begin )

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buffyxxwillow October 31 2003, 22:43:45 UTC
Ooh, a cliffhanger. I like it!

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pashoshi October 31 2003, 23:34:27 UTC
*cough* B'nai mitzvah is not a verb (this is a saying that was ingrained into my brain during bat mitzvah class). But I guess Kristy wouldn't know that, so it's all good.

Anyway, this sounds like it could be interesting. And, yeah, although I haven't read anything BSC in a while, I think you've got the style down pretty well. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a sign that you've been spending way too much time reading BSC books, but that's your prerogative. :-)

Good luck!

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slurp November 5 2003, 11:37:52 UTC
"*cough* B'nai mitzvah is not a verb (this is a saying that was ingrained into my brain during bat mitzvah class). But I guess Kristy wouldn't know that, so it's all good."

Yep. They used it wrong in the books originally :D

Anyway, I think this is a great start and I'm loving it. Very interesting to tackle diversity in the BSC world.

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teleute12 November 1 2003, 01:13:38 UTC
Heeee. I love this. You even have the exposition! I can't wait to see more.

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ruenowrimo November 1 2003, 06:45:20 UTC
I have such a big desire to read the BSC now. *g*
Also? This is mighty cool.

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nicole_anell November 1 2003, 08:38:56 UTC
but it doesn't fit into the BSC notebook, which is where we talk about our clients, and it didn't fit into the mystery notebook either.
Hee! I'm loving this way too much.

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