Brown Leafed Vertigo #13-1

[foxflare]

Story Title: Brown Leafed Vertigo
Chapter Title: On the First Go-Round
Author: foxflare
Disclaimer: I own no part of Cl2(aq) + H2O(l) ↔ 2H+(aq) + Cl-(aq) + ClO-(aq). Kubo Tite-sama whitens & brightens all.
Chapter Summary: Yumichika's New Year's Eve party, part the first.

Comments

[blood_crow]

Alright, I'm really trying not to comment on every chapter, because for some reason I'm reluctant to have so many things waiting for you in your inbox...

BUT NEVERTHELESS, I CAN'T HELP MYSELF.

Thanks to you, it's gonna be hard for me to ever see/read about Renji and not think of him as having bad breath, lol. It's been perpetual throughout this fic, and damn you!!! XD

Is it bad that I read about Shuuhei staring at Kensei('s naked chest) and immediately thought OH HELLS YES. Though, admittedly, I'm still ALL for the Shuu/Yumi that you have going on in this story.

Oh Ukitake-san... that entire scene was just... I grimaced in pain, and the rubbed at my forehead the way you do when you're feeling uncomfortable and embarrassed for someone. But that's what's so intriguing about your writing, you go from fun times at Yumi's part to hard times at Byakuya's, and then back again ;)

Gin wormed his way in and out of conversations seemingly at random, disregarding all signs as to whether or not they were open to uninvited contributors.

[xglimpsex]

the rhythm a topless boy somewhere in his early twenties with silver devilock and a 69 tattooed low on his chest, whom Shuuhei, perched on one of the amps with a beer in one hand and a cigarette in the other, was watching with open admiration.

FUCK YEAH!