Comments | fourteencandles: Fic: Me With You and You With Me, Entourage, V/E, E/OMC, R, (3/3)

fourteencandles

Fic: Me With You and You With Me, Entourage, V/E, E/OMC, R, (3/3)

Jun 21, 2008 01:51

Notes in Part 1. ( Part 3 )

Comments 26

oanja June 21 2008, 11:08:30 UTC

Whee that was fun! But I ended up feeling really sorry for Travis, seriously, there needs to be more Eric's around.

The only thing that bugged me a bit was in part one after the whole 'lets get drunk and talk about the past' date was that E ended up driving home. I got the impression that he was pretty drunk? It's just that drunk driving = bad. (but maybe I got the wrong impression)

Oh and I loved the bi!Eric and his relationships with people who weren't Vince. It's pretty weird because normally I don't really like OC who take up too much space. Yours were really well done though.

fourteencandles June 21 2008, 11:35:38 UTC

Yeah, Travis nearly got his happy ending here, but I couldn't quite do it to Vince. ;) And good call on the earlier scene with drinking -- I meant to imply that Eric wasn't drinking as much as Vince was, but I totally see that's not clear, so I added a little to make it more obvious. Because, yeah, drunk driving is DEFINITELY not cool, and also not in character for E. Thanks for the comment and the close read.

justabi June 21 2008, 15:02:11 UTC

Someday, her Vince will come.”

*sporfle*

Oh, god, that is bad. *cries laughing*

I love this story. That is all.

fourteencandles July 3 2008, 08:11:18 UTC

Hee, I totally believe that Vince is capable of very bad humor. :) Glad you still like.

mistress_tien June 21 2008, 20:13:48 UTC

I really liked Travis. There's a part of me wishing for a three-way, but I know the boys aren't like that.

Great story . . . I enjoyed it a lot (as usual). Thanks so much for sharing.

fourteencandles July 3 2008, 08:11:51 UTC

Heh, yeah, they probably wouldn't go 3-way. Well, Vince might. ;) Glad you liked it.

burntcopper June 21 2008, 20:19:13 UTC

...I've just felt extremely pouty about E doing that to Travis. You're not supposed to make the competition to the OTP that sweet. BAD author.

:ponders: now, what Shauna will say about E doing Vince as opposed to Travis... Mind you, there's probably been rumours about them for years, which she's *used* to shrugging off.

fourteencandles July 3 2008, 08:13:14 UTC

Yeah, I felt kind of pouty, too, but Travis knew going in that it was possibly temporary, right?

Oh, Shauna can protect them, right? She can do anything.

ebcdic June 22 2008, 01:30:37 UTC

i love turtle here with the whole 'erica' thing. awesome. also, the fact that the sex between eric and vince wasn't all perfect at the end. wonderful stuff.

fourteencandles July 3 2008, 08:13:53 UTC

Heh -- there's just no way that after all that build-up, it could be perfect, right? ;) Glad you liked it! Thanks for the comment.