[je, nagase/gussan/leader] moments on clock

[greatfountain]

Title: Moments on clock
Fandom: Johnny’s and Associates (TOKIO)
Pairing: Nagase/Yamaguchi/Joshima
Rating: R
Word count: ~1400
Warnings: Threesome, fairly PWP, screwy timeline, angst
Summary: Gussan knows, even if Joshima doesn’t believe him. And Nagase’s just there to translate.
Notes: Written for basil_ovelby as a bribe tactic. XD

Comments

[micehell]

The HEA person in me is a little sad, though I guess yay for Nagase and Leader. ;) But, yeah, the Gussan fanatic appreciator in me was a little mopey after I finished the story, though that was more for the fact that Gussan kept trying to take the non-confrontational/passive way of dealing with the whole thing than that he's never going to have a completely happy ever after ('cause forget even all those years with Leader and the still kind of gay for him thing, now he's had Nagase, and is there really any going back from that, either? ;). Definitely a great story, though, a very deft piece of character work, catching pieces of all of them, both good and bad, in very few words. It's often the tiny details that expose the most (Nagase taking Leader off at the end, the grip Nagase had had on Gussan's leg, the way he helped with the shoes even while angry, even the fact that Gussan wrung the towel out and then left without saying anything else), and the whole thing... just really well done.

And I really tried not to be happy about the part where Gussan grabbed Nagase's hair and pulled him into the kiss, since this was theoretically more Gussan/Leader and Nagase/Leader than a true threesome, but, mmm, the kneejerk Gussan/Nagase shipper in me liked it a lot. *snork*

[greatfountain]

Thank you so much! This started off as "I'll write your porn for every chapter of your readings you do :D :D" and. I got this. :l lol this got a lot more Nagase character study than I meant it, but he's the one I'm most comfortable with in this situation so I'm not really surprised. :D;;

lmao if there had been more opportunities for Gussan/Nagase I would have taken them, unf unf. Sadly, not this time. ):

Thanks so much for commenting. :D :D