[je, jin-centric kat-tun gen] thunder-fire

[greatfountain]

Title: Thunder-fire
Characters, Pairings: (this part) KAT-TUN, primarily Jin / Jin+Kame-ish?
Rating: PG-13 for Jin’s mouth
Warnings: Weirdness, AU (RESCUE/CHANGE UR WORLD)
Word Count: ~2000
Summary: Akanishi Jin, super-powered former super-soldier, and the surprises of returns. Part 1 of 2.
Notes: Thanks to rinhriveiel for the beta, as always. Written for katmillia. I

Comments

[katmillia]

WHAT IS THIS OH MY GOD SERIOUSLY I WAS LIKE HOLY SHIT ON A LEASH I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO WITH THIS BUT HOLY MOTHER OF GOD THIS IS INTENSE.

Kame shoved him against the stone wall and breathed, melting them into the bricks. Then they were-part-of the prison, breath replaced by stone and heartbeat by the pitter-patter of feet along the floor, and he wasn’t sure where he ended and Kame began, one mutual slide with Kame hissing calm, Jin, stay calm in his ear until they stumble out the other side.
THIS IS SO GORGEOUS. This whole paragraph is just PERFECTION.

Oh my god the groups! And now I want to know more about the agency, what is the agency? UWAH THE LITTLE HINTS ABOUT FIGHTING NEWS IN THE ATRIUM, where Tegoshi did something to Jin and Jin was in a coma when Koki was putting him back together holy bejesus. Oh my god. Kanjani is there and JJPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP IS EVAPORATING TRAPS OH MY GOD THAT'S SO AWESOME and I love how you've incorporated their powers into this, and adding in Jin's lightning, he's like the piece that wasn't in the video (but should have been). ♥ ♥ NINO + KAME DEALS!! Jin's contact with Pi!! PEOPLE WHO WANT OUT OF THE DORMS.

ajsfkdjsfkjsakjfkdsjfkdsjfklslkfjdskjfk /incoherent capslock ahoy

Um, hi, this is amazing, you are wonderful, I AM SO EXCITE ABOUT THIS I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU HOW MANY TIMES. Your dialogue. It's all desperate and confused and Jin's trying to get a handle on what's going on and can't and ungh. UNNNNNGGGHHHH this is just amazing there is nothing else to say right now. So much love for you. SO MUCH LOVE WHAT IS THIS ILU. ♥ ♥

*eager beaver for more*

[greatfountain]

LMAO YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW GLAD I AM YOU LIKE THIS. LIKE, NONE.

I.. really liked the paragraph so I'm glad you liked it, too. :D;;

You'll find out in the next part! (lol Murakami is Hina/the one who smacks people/Jacky, JJP is Maruyama bb. it's okay i still love you.) the NEWS-KAT-TUN fight is... intense D: Jin's either fire or lightning in my head, and Ueda already HBIC'd his way into being the fire dude, so... :D? Nino wasn't even supposed to be in this but I like can't leave him out of anything and obviously if I'm going to write Jin/Kame I have to include Pi somewhere to offset it and. :U where am I even going with this I have no idea so whatever!

OH MY GOD THE DIALOGUE GAVE ME SO MUCH TROUBLE YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW. I was firmly convinced I sucked at it when I was writing this, Jin says like fifteen variations of "what the fuck" like fifty billion times and nothing else and I was like "ugh this fic makes me sound so stupid" but. I'm glad it's working. (lol my beta was like "wtf this is fine" but. it's fic for katy hannah you don't get it etc etc)

Give me another couple of days to argue with myself about pacing and you'll get the second half! ♥♥♥

[katmillia]

I GOT SO EXCITED I CAN'T EVEN REMEMBER KANJANI NAMES LOOK AT THAT. /still dumb /also it's early /also i'm grumpy at being woken up by phone calls /okay nevermind i'm just still dumb /why am i making so many notes here

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. I just can't believe you are writing me anything with Jin/Kame at all, and I think this means you really love me, and I think this means now I'm going to suckerfish myself onto you and be this weepy mass of happy!Katy. Forever. And ever.

Um, the dialogue is amazing don't even be sweating that it reads and flows so naturally and if I were Jin, I'd be saying "what the fuck" 50 times, too.

♥♥♥&hea&♥♥♥rts;♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[greatfountain]

UH-HUH. /giving you the benefit of the doubt /don't worry katy it's early

It does mean I really love you ;~~~; I still don't ship it actively but if I think about "shit Katy likes" while I'm writing fic for you Jin/Kame keeps popping up and. I don't think they're going to be making out, but I can subtext to hell and back so. >_> oh lord no weeping be happy! /irony coming from she who wibbled over the initial comment lmao

That was kinda what I thought? I mean I wouldn't be saying anything but "what the fuck" over and over again either...

......lol did you mean to mess that up?
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[katmillia]

.... NO I MEANT TO DO THAT WITH THE HEARTS....

Shut up. ♥

[greatfountain]

IT'S OKAY I BELIEVE YOU

I'm sorry, I had to ♥