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fourcoldpaws

exo; biscuits

Sep 01, 2012 18:45

sebaekkai. nc-17. 1722 words. in which sehun, baekhyun and jongin play limp biscuit. (originally posted at seoulfulness)

( Sehun sort of wants to pound his face into the floor because what the fuck is he doing. What the fuck is he trying to prove. That he’s good at getting himself off? Is that some kind of accomplishment? )

nc-17, exo, boys

Comments 17

crazyemosrock September 3 2012, 00:29:00 UTC

oh mym fucknig GOD

ahem...oh my god. wow. can i marry your porn

fourcoldpaws September 4 2012, 17:28:45 UTC

hurrhurr ty~

whatever's legal in your state \o/

cocacola September 3 2012, 01:19:01 UTC

this is amazing omfg. can you write like legit sebaekai porn too b/c that would be the best unf (wow this is such a shit comment i suck at commenting but i really liked this ok bye)

fourcoldpaws September 4 2012, 17:31:07 UTC

ngl i am contemplating writing an actual circlejerk fic as the original prompter wanted. (i just couldn't pass up on something so deliciously disgusting as a limp biscuit.) we'll see what happens trolol. (it is a great comment, tysm ;--;)

g_odalisque13 September 3 2012, 03:37:49 UTC

i read this on seoulfulness as well and loved it too!
poor sehun being the one to always lose. and to get off to different things. or at least the one who doesn't act like he gets off to those things. kai seems to enjoy watching the rest of the and baekhyun enjoys himself (loved btw). although i have to give them props for their taste in women. jungsis ftw!
but oh man. sehun surprised them at the end!
though...i keep having to forcefully push the thought of that saltine out of my mind. blech. XD

fourcoldpaws September 4 2012, 17:32:35 UTC

hurrhurr i have a thing for icky stuff. this was much too tempting to pass up on. ty for reading, bb!

sunlitstreet September 3 2012, 10:32:38 UTC

I really, really like this. The way you write is very... lyrical, I guess? It's beautiful, especially for a story with so much smut haha. I loved Sehun's initial shyness and then his don't-give-a-damn attitude towards the end, and I loved that Baekhyun was involved. "Odd" and not so popular pairings are my favourites. Please, keep it up!

fourcoldpaws September 4 2012, 17:34:14 UTC

oh my, i am so glad to hear that because i really struggle to give an extra twist to my words and to my writing, even if it's just smut. ty ty! ;--; and yes, rarepairs are the best.

romancewasborn September 3 2012, 14:24:19 UTC

fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck
the way you write is so smooth,
and i just, i don't have a way with words.

but just.

fourcoldpaws September 4 2012, 17:36:43 UTC

oh myyyy, i'm so glad to hear that! i try. ;--; (although i think you have some way with words. your comment almost sounds like a haiku 8D) ty bb!