Fanfiction - Naruto - Approval ch5

[fortunewriter]

So, yeah, this is why I don’t like posting stories when I’m not totally done writing them. It’s a rule of mine, yet somehow, every year or so, I forget why I hate it so much. This story was mostly finished (done in my head, just not written out) so I figure, sure, I can keep up with it. Now, if I had done the math, I would have known that this

Comments

[_ofuda_]

This fic is very sweet. I love the voice you gave to Naruto, it fits both as a 16 year old and as Naruto himself.

The ending got me, though. It was the perfect emotional punch to finish it off.

Love it!

[fortunewriter]

I've been paying no attention to my lovely reviewers, but thank you for reading ^_^ I'm glad you've liked it, I worked hard(ish) And if it got that reaction, the ending is win~

[dawls85]

A great ending to a great story. Great job on this! Every character was well-written, especially Jiraiya (even though he only had a few lines, he was perfectly in-character! I loved it!), and the premise was interesting.

Again, great job on an adorable fic!

[fortunewriter]

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I tried to get Jiraiya right, I rarely write him ^_^

[fortunewriter]

I love your icon, that's just adorable!

thanks for the read, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much ^_^

[senna_chan]

Good ending. Really good. I enjoy the fact that Iruka finally goes and presents Kakashi to his family. ^_^

Oh, and the scene with Jirayia and Kakashi's destroyed apartment was hilarious. Especially Icha Icha-part. XD

- Senna-chan

[fortunewriter]

I was originally going to have Iruka head to the memorial stone, to tell his parents...but I thought this showed a bigger step for him.
Thanks for the lovely reviews. I luv you Senna-chan!

[xxlanaxx]

It was actually quite difficult to remember they both weren’t twelve.

best line ever, epic fic my dear

[fortunewriter]

And so true!

glad you liked it~